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I Love Burlesque
Growing was up I used to watch
the weakly televised vedets,
seasoned performers of burlesque,
gorgeous dancers of fine cabarets;
so glamorous, so beautiful
every man desired her in every way
every woman loathed her for the same.
she embodied and exuded sex,
showing men what they
wished to ardently possess,
but will never, ever get,
she was an unapologetic coquette,
flaunting all his desires
becoming his fantasy’s poppet.
I have grown up…
Oh, I must confess…
there nothing I like better
than dancing burlesque.
Shimmy, shimmy, shake, shake
wiggle just a little till they
in their shoes quake…
All eyes on me, they see
what they want to see,
every night I create for them
every kind of sensually
forbidden erotic fantasy.
I show them a little… then I take it back,
flaunt a little, but what they see is not fact,
illusion, not really there,
everything is cleverly concealed
but enough to fool the mind
making them painfully aware.
Hahaha…
The thrill, the tease
the illusion of make believe,
I am yours, performing just for you,
the audience ceases to exist,
you become oblivious of everything
but the movements of my supple hips
Hahaha… I toy with your mind,
oh how you would sell your soul
if only you could capture
what your eyes behold,
but that is not to be
fore when my show is over,
reality is obvious to see;
I am a performer, a coquette
a burlesque dancer;
something I skillfully
made you forget.
Gypsy Red
*Vedet n. starlet, young actress,
dancer being promoted as a future star
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Re: I Love Burlesque
9th Aug 2013 8:04pm
Brilliant!! N yea u can remember out dad getting
chewed out for watching HBO's burlesque episode lol
chewed out for watching HBO's burlesque episode lol
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9th Aug 2013 8:18pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 9th Aug 2013 8:37pm
9th Aug 2013 8:36pm
This ink was such a tantalizing tease! I love Burlesque too!:)
When I was younger I use to dream of being a burlesque dancer; A HEAD LINER to be exact! lollol.....
I was so delusional in my youth! ;)
I love this ink, Red! Brilliant as always...Xoxo
When I was younger I use to dream of being a burlesque dancer; A HEAD LINER to be exact! lollol.....
I was so delusional in my youth! ;)
I love this ink, Red! Brilliant as always...Xoxo
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9th Aug 2013 10:50pm
Lovely read for its glimpses of the psychology on the part of the viewed and the viewer. The hot side of Forties glamour.
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Re: I Love Burlesque
10th Aug 2013 5:03am
A great combination of sensuality, playfulness and irony. And beautifully controlled writing.
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10th Aug 2013 5:27am
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re: Re: I Love Burlesque
10th Aug 2013 1:10pm
Med too Grace, my mom thew fits about this stuff lol
Thanks for reading.
Red
Thanks for reading.
Red
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Re: I Love Burlesque
10th Aug 2013 7:42pm
There I was pie-eyed and salivating in my youth not really understanding the why of the trance--thanks for taking me back!!!
Wonderful Write Red!!!
Wonderful Write Red!!!
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11th Aug 2013 4:02pm
Thanks Naaj, glad you enjoyed it it was meant to be playful because after all that is the nature of burlesque! lol
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