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Come Together
Crawl inside me
with your profound
words
Address my mind
leaving traces all over
my heart
Only you can unite
my thoughts with
your pleasure
with your profound
words
Address my mind
leaving traces all over
my heart
Only you can unite
my thoughts with
your pleasure
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Re: Come Together
9th Aug 2013 5:39am
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9th Aug 2013 6:53am
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9th Aug 2013 6:10am
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9th Aug 2013 6:54am
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re: Re: Come Together
9th Aug 2013 6:58am
Barney Fife...Gilligan ...lmao ;)
I enjoy uplifting ...
Gilligan would have been fun! HA HA
I enjoy uplifting ...
Gilligan would have been fun! HA HA
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9th Aug 2013 8:55am
Oh yeah..she was the naughty one,
I know she was...Ginger had nothing
on her ;)
I know she was...Ginger had nothing
on her ;)
Re: Come Together
9th Aug 2013 7:39am
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Re: Come Together
9th Aug 2013 9:00am
For some reason the extended importance of the "you" identified made me think of King Louis XIV, "the sun king".
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9th Aug 2013 9:04am
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Re: Come Together
9th Aug 2013 9:51am
Few words that say a lot. Could be read with an erotic interpretation (this way with words reminded me of the some of Magdalena's albeit more-worded poems).
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re: Re: Come Together
9th Aug 2013 9:59am
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9th Aug 2013 11:14am
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re: Re: Come Together
9th Aug 2013 11:17am
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9th Aug 2013 11:18pm
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9th Aug 2013 11:20pm
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