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Future Autumn
Time shades me yellow and reds
I fall and float on a breeze
Rolling through life at ease....
until i touch down
Still.
Golden dance of death
Flawless fall of innocent
Slowly pacing through
the endless cycle that never ends
Flash of Love...Pure
Brilliant Blinding Beauty... Perfect
Warm Grip,
Cold slip,
Sailing ship into the sunset
Hot tones
Fade alone
Death recycles life's adventures
I fall and float on a breeze
Rolling through life at ease....
until i touch down
Still.
Golden dance of death
Flawless fall of innocent
Slowly pacing through
the endless cycle that never ends
Flash of Love...Pure
Brilliant Blinding Beauty... Perfect
Warm Grip,
Cold slip,
Sailing ship into the sunset
Hot tones
Fade alone
Death recycles life's adventures
Published 28th Jul 2013
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- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
28th Jul 2013 00:17am
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28th Jul 2013 1:00am
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
29th Jul 2013 3:28pm
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1st Sep 2013 7:42am
i like the flow of this piece, and the way you say what you're saying here--"Golden dance of death", Death recycles life's adventures."
if i may make one little critical observation--your line "the endless cycle that never ends"--that's very redundant, and in very stark contrast to the quality of the rest of the piece. i'm sure there's a way to change it.
if i may make one little critical observation--your line "the endless cycle that never ends"--that's very redundant, and in very stark contrast to the quality of the rest of the piece. i'm sure there's a way to change it.