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And it was
It was, if but for a sleeping moment
a vision of a dream
and it was, it would seem; enough to awaken me again
to open my eyes
and breathe with conviction
I am me, I am alive
It was something, and it was nothing at all
not anything that could be worded
or painted onto a canvas
like all the other somethings and nothings
that have come and gone
or grown strong enough to live on indefinitely
it was beauty, like northern skies being taken
by the pinks and cyan of Aurora borealis
each brief wave, electrifying, progressing to its peak
then dying out to make way for the next one
and so on
and it was something, really quite something
a vision of a dream
and it was, it would seem; enough to awaken me again
to open my eyes
and breathe with conviction
I am me, I am alive
It was something, and it was nothing at all
not anything that could be worded
or painted onto a canvas
like all the other somethings and nothings
that have come and gone
or grown strong enough to live on indefinitely
it was beauty, like northern skies being taken
by the pinks and cyan of Aurora borealis
each brief wave, electrifying, progressing to its peak
then dying out to make way for the next one
and so on
and it was something, really quite something
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th Sep 2020 7:37pm
27th Jul 2013 9:03am
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27th Jul 2013 9:13am
Missy,
wow, thank you for the words, very encouraging to read.
yeah, I like saying that myself, though most people these days say Northern lights, which incidentally I wouldn't mind taking a trip up the top of Scottyland to have a peep at.
as for the Audio, I'd be more than honored.
thank you kindly for dropping by and leaving your footprint.
wow, thank you for the words, very encouraging to read.
yeah, I like saying that myself, though most people these days say Northern lights, which incidentally I wouldn't mind taking a trip up the top of Scottyland to have a peep at.
as for the Audio, I'd be more than honored.
thank you kindly for dropping by and leaving your footprint.
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 11:39am
27th Jul 2013 9:22am
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27th Jul 2013 9:32am
Thank you, Petit one
I keep getting mixed up with the two, good catch, changed it over
yeah, I like that, kind of like them little white dots that sometimes appear in my eyes, when I try focus on them they go straight into the peripheral again.
thank you kindly for dropping by and leaving your words
I keep getting mixed up with the two, good catch, changed it over
yeah, I like that, kind of like them little white dots that sometimes appear in my eyes, when I try focus on them they go straight into the peripheral again.
thank you kindly for dropping by and leaving your words
Re: And it was
27th Jul 2013 9:59am
What a great read, leaving a wonderful
picture in my mind...enjoyed this very much!
picture in my mind...enjoyed this very much!
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re: Re: And it was
27th Jul 2013 10:16am
Tommie,
ha, glad to hear it missus, not sure I wanna ask what wonderful picture was in your mind.
happy to have you drop by anytime, and thanks for the words
ha, glad to hear it missus, not sure I wanna ask what wonderful picture was in your mind.
happy to have you drop by anytime, and thanks for the words
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
27th Jul 2013 11:17am
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re: Re: And it was
27th Jul 2013 8:09pm
Re: And it was
27th Jul 2013 11:49am
This is like a half-wake musing, between reality and dreams, with some pretty images.
You could lose the last line in Stanza 3.
Lovely.
You could lose the last line in Stanza 3.
Lovely.
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re: Re: And it was
27th Jul 2013 8:11pm
Atakti,
so glad you liked this little ditty, I think , on reflection that you're probably right about that line, I'll probably cut it out before the end of the day.
thanks for the stop by and the words kind Lady
so glad you liked this little ditty, I think , on reflection that you're probably right about that line, I'll probably cut it out before the end of the day.
thanks for the stop by and the words kind Lady
Re: And it was
27th Jul 2013 3:58pm
Beautiful. I love how you leave the reader wondering what you're speaking of, as well as making it so the reader can emit their own personal experience into the piece. Great work, Eamonn!
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re: Re: And it was
27th Jul 2013 8:13pm
Rachel, me ol' flower
I love that you love, and that you drop by here when you get a chance, and thank you for that, and for the words you leave.
cheers.
I love that you love, and that you drop by here when you get a chance, and thank you for that, and for the words you leave.
cheers.
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 11:36am
27th Jul 2013 10:49pm
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27th Jul 2013 11:15pm
Jesta,
cool, you get it. It can be quite exhilarating when it happens, I'm happy you found it relatable.
delighted to see you drop by missus, thank you for the words, I appreciate it
cool, you get it. It can be quite exhilarating when it happens, I'm happy you found it relatable.
delighted to see you drop by missus, thank you for the words, I appreciate it
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Feb 2019 4:35pm
27th Sep 2013 1:38am
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re: Re: And it was
27th Sep 2013 9:55pm
ah, Vee hullo
Thanks for dropping by and leaving your thoughts. this piece of madness is among my favorites
Happy you enjoyed it, after all that's a lot of what it's all about for me, my thoughts being enjoyed.
Thanks for dropping by and leaving your thoughts. this piece of madness is among my favorites
Happy you enjoyed it, after all that's a lot of what it's all about for me, my thoughts being enjoyed.
Re: And it was
30th Oct 2013 10:33am