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The Other
On your mind there
should be only one,
yet there I am, the other,
the vise you will not shun.
In your mind’s peripheral
I remain unaddressed,
the dirty little secret
which you cannot confess.
The forbidden fruit
you must not taste,
yet you have sampled
all be it in stolen haste.
I am your temptation,
your sensual damnation,
and she, your redemption;
source of your adoration.
None the less, I still exist,
you will not relinquish
this prohibited dish,
your passions catalyst.
I create within your psyche
a world of vivid imagination,
far beyond the visual acuity
and mundane machinations.
A seed that quietly germinates,
its ravenous need you must satiate,
the greed that you cannot placate
ignites a fire you won’t exterminate.
I am every deprived of desire,
dressed in all manner of attire;
every fantasy you could sire
and openly could never acquire.
I am… the illicit attribute,
the muse that remains mute
yet ,my effect is very acute,
a pleasure you do not refute.
I now happily fade to black
a shadow in your minds back
aware of the societal caveat
I accept our ethereal format.
Gypsy Red
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- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
26th Jul 2013 3:44pm
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26th Jul 2013 4:11pm
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26th Jul 2013 4:16pm
I thinks secretly most of us can relate to this one.
Thanks Miki, always appreciate the luv.
Red
Thanks Miki, always appreciate the luv.
Red
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26th Jul 2013 4:26pm
"Illicit attribute....."......upskirt visionary high priestess..the floor is looking good about now...
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26th Jul 2013 4:28pm
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26th Jul 2013 5:07pm
superb a real master class in poetry and story telling.
Much enjoyed as always
Marcus
Much enjoyed as always
Marcus
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26th Jul 2013 7:08pm
Coming from you Marcus that is a very high praise thank you so very much. :-)
Red
Red
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26th Jul 2013 5:17pm
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26th Jul 2013 7:10pm
What a lovely way to be called smarty pants hahaha
Thank you D for the wonderful comment!
Red
Thank you D for the wonderful comment!
Red
Re: The Other
Like a flame that when an attempt is made to put it out it only grows higher. (or as Bowie sang, "Putting Out A Fire With Gasoline") So many analogies come into my head when reading this...
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26th Jul 2013 10:45pm
Well! I thank you Naaj most humbly for the complement, as for the other three, yes, yes and yes...Very astute!
Red
Red
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26th Jul 2013 9:17pm
I agree 100 with Naajir...this is CLASSIC n a master class example on poetry 101!
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26th Jul 2013 10:46pm
Poe you flatterer you! muaaahsss hehehe I am so happy you liked it, Thank you!
Red
Red
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26th Jul 2013 10:01pm
Absolutely adore this. It definitely reaches me on a personal level. Quite honestly this could apply to every individual.
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27th Jul 2013 3:32am
Kickin' wicked Red!!!
I Love it much(sensual is an always--but at times as in this write Your word choice is always tops!!!)
I Love it much(sensual is an always--but at times as in this write Your word choice is always tops!!!)
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27th Jul 2013 3:50am
You flatter me Soul, I'll juts eat it up like candy lol Thanks for reading!
Red
Red
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