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The tast of blood and Love you seek.
Lets dance together in this rain of blood.
You show me pain, My first true love.
A taste required, so bitter sweet.
A taste of blood, a soulless feast.
A lost desire, in witch I crave.
A heated passion, where I'm your slave.
Your eyes they speak a hidden truth.
Our skin, our bones, our blood, our youth.
Take away my flesh, and meat,
And you will find the love you seek.
By darkheartmagic
© 2011 darkheartmagic (All rights reserved)
You show me pain, My first true love.
A taste required, so bitter sweet.
A taste of blood, a soulless feast.
A lost desire, in witch I crave.
A heated passion, where I'm your slave.
Your eyes they speak a hidden truth.
Our skin, our bones, our blood, our youth.
Take away my flesh, and meat,
And you will find the love you seek.
By darkheartmagic
© 2011 darkheartmagic (All rights reserved)
Published 17th Jul 2013
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 1:40pm
17th Jul 2013 7:21pm
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17th Jul 2013 7:32pm
17th Jul 2013 7:35pm
Thank you both for your comment I hope to have the time to write some new stuff tonight while I'm at work.
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
17th Jul 2013 7:42pm
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Anonymous
17th Jul 2013 9:11pm
"Take away my flesh, and meat,
And you will find the love you seek."<----dope line!
Nicely penned! Xo
And you will find the love you seek."<----dope line!
Nicely penned! Xo
18th Jul 2013 3:01am
AMAZING!!! :) I really enjoy how you rhyme. The rhyming isn't to repetitive. (which i think tends to be a little annoying.) I really like your writing.
23rd Jul 2013 2:16pm
