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Insignificant
- as much as i say i don't care
i care even more... -
cause a caress, an insignificant smile
or even the simplest hello becomes
significant over time..
i care even more... -
cause a caress, an insignificant smile
or even the simplest hello becomes
significant over time..
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3rd Dec 2010 1:25am
I want to add this in my reading list...
3rd Dec 2010 5:09am
I think I should talk to webmistress. This one is one step ahead of my imperfectionist and I think belongs to the same category of poems that reflects a zeal, a longing, a desire often ignored. Good to see Ophie creating a long poem as compared to her previous ones. The more the queen poetess writes, the more I crave for:-)
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re: I want to add this in my reading list...
3rd Dec 2010 10:45am
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3rd Dec 2010 2:51pm
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Insignificant? No!
3rd Dec 2010 5:19pm
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6th Dec 2010 7:23am
I like how you use a bare minimum of words to both maximize the impact of the piece and provoke thought in the reader... A skill I hope to learn by examples such as this.
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8th Dec 2010 2:30pm
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minimal again
16th Dec 2010 11:18am
well u certainly have a knack for emotional minimilism once again you convet so much with so little well done
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re: minimal again
16th Dec 2010 11:22am
quite significantly put
31st Dec 2010 11:27am
= )
18th Feb 2011 6:11pm
i like your ability to compress an estounding amount of words into just a few phrases.
nice.
nice.
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