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When She Shows Me
"Do you mind?"
she asked
as she slipped
her hand
into her panties.
Not at all;
you do
whatever
you need to do;
just feel comfortable.
She squeezed
the trigger
on down,
and I could sense
in the low
gutteral shudders
of her moans
that my talking
to her
letting her know
being there
coaxing her flight
would be all
she needed
to acheive lift off.
She gripped
her pillow tightly,
winced
in profundity,
and managed
to find
a small patch
of land
along the sheets
where she
could rest
her arms
and thighs.
runningturtle87
she asked
as she slipped
her hand
into her panties.
Not at all;
you do
whatever
you need to do;
just feel comfortable.
She squeezed
the trigger
on down,
and I could sense
in the low
gutteral shudders
of her moans
that my talking
to her
letting her know
being there
coaxing her flight
would be all
she needed
to acheive lift off.
She gripped
her pillow tightly,
winced
in profundity,
and managed
to find
a small patch
of land
along the sheets
where she
could rest
her arms
and thighs.
runningturtle87
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