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Seven days of bondage - Day 4
He took me for a walk
I wore a floaty dress
With rope for underwear
I felt it’s rough caress
As I walked with him
He loved my quiet moans
He whispered things he’d do
When he got me home
We stepped back through the door
The dress dropped to my feet
In Shibari underwear
He said I looked a treat
He sat down on his chair
with me across his knee
Spanking me with passion
He knows that pleases me
I feel his pleasure too
As I am getting wetter
His skillful fingers enter
Into my zone of pleasure
And now I moan again
but wait for him to say
''you may come now my pet,
a good girl you've been today''
I wore a floaty dress
With rope for underwear
I felt it’s rough caress
As I walked with him
He loved my quiet moans
He whispered things he’d do
When he got me home
We stepped back through the door
The dress dropped to my feet
In Shibari underwear
He said I looked a treat
He sat down on his chair
with me across his knee
Spanking me with passion
He knows that pleases me
I feel his pleasure too
As I am getting wetter
His skillful fingers enter
Into my zone of pleasure
And now I moan again
but wait for him to say
''you may come now my pet,
a good girl you've been today''
Published 15th Jul 2013
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15th Jul 2013 9:44am
lol I just learned about Japanese bondage XD
great poem.
though the last sentence didn't feel as strong as the rest of the poem.
great poem.
though the last sentence didn't feel as strong as the rest of the poem.
Thanks,
It felt unfinished. I have added more verses. Perhaps it reads better when you start from day 1.
Gem :)
It felt unfinished. I have added more verses. Perhaps it reads better when you start from day 1.
Gem :)
15th Jul 2013 11:58am
I was born in Japan....permission is the gateway to honor, and to submit is a great honor. Permission to orgasm thus is to allow oneself to release without fear or self-consciousness...being under the watchful eye of a protector, not unlike giving birth. This level of intimacy blows away the casual associations of Vanilla thought, translating into an inner-constructed bond that is unassailable.
15th Jul 2013 8:04pm
I agree about this level of intimacy and having this bond is like no other. As you will know the Shibari is Japanese too..