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I got your message
I want to join in your revolution
Your revolution of peace
I recently found my brand-new voice
My ignorance has been released
I got your message
I got your message
I got your message
Your message of equality
Because I am no better than you my friend
and you are no better than me
I've got good news I've got bad news
Both of them are the truth
The good news is you're exactly like us
The bad news is you're just like us to
I got your message
I got your message
I got your message
Your message of equality
Because I am no better than you my friend
and you are no better than me
Everyone loves Bob Marley the poet
The profit,the shaman,the weed
But,if you ask him what he'd like to be known for
He'd say "the message is my seed"
I got your message
I got your message
I got your message
Your message of equality
Because I am no better than you my friend
and you are no better than me
Entered in the competition "when you felt it"
Inspired by the song "War" and the overall philosophy of Bob Marley
Your revolution of peace
I recently found my brand-new voice
My ignorance has been released
I got your message
I got your message
I got your message
Your message of equality
Because I am no better than you my friend
and you are no better than me
I've got good news I've got bad news
Both of them are the truth
The good news is you're exactly like us
The bad news is you're just like us to
I got your message
I got your message
I got your message
Your message of equality
Because I am no better than you my friend
and you are no better than me
Everyone loves Bob Marley the poet
The profit,the shaman,the weed
But,if you ask him what he'd like to be known for
He'd say "the message is my seed"
I got your message
I got your message
I got your message
Your message of equality
Because I am no better than you my friend
and you are no better than me
Entered in the competition "when you felt it"
Inspired by the song "War" and the overall philosophy of Bob Marley
Published 15th Jul 2013
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15th Jul 2013 9:37am
Heyyy, way to go, stepping up with audio performance! Nice one. Good luck with the comp!
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16th Jul 2013 00:38am
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
15th Jul 2013 12:26pm
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Someone who is very cool once wrote this and I think it seems to apply here.
"there is music in my veins
I never want it to leave me
no matter how much
life makes me bleed"
"there is music in my veins
I never want it to leave me
no matter how much
life makes me bleed"
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 7:52pm
15th Jul 2013 12:52pm
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16th Jul 2013 00:43am
I'm so glad you liked it my fellow guitar player. I'm glad you picked up on the meter aspect it's always been one of the things that I love about music. If a lyric doesn't flow it needs to go .Thank you for running a great competition.
Anonymous
- Edited 17th May 2018 9:40pm
16th Jul 2013 2:44am
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17th Jul 2013 11:14pm
Thank you .It would definitely sound better with a harmonica in the background.
17th Jul 2013 1:58pm
cool tribute to Mr.Marley, now if we live out and allow the seed to grow.
17th Jul 2013 11:15pm
Thank you man . Yes I agree we should just take one year and do Bob's way. I would bet anything that it works.
23rd Jul 2013 3:44am
dude, this is good. its almost similar to my "Dear DU Poetry" rhyme lol but its good :) keep up the good work
23rd Jul 2013 4:13am
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26th Jul 2013 1:32am
I am so sorry. I saw the word arrogant and I always assume that to be most man I have met.LoL I am such a fucking idiot sometimes.
lol its all gud, no sweat ahahaaha and lmao xD and nah u aint lol u cool tho haha