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Fly~
Deep inside these bitter wall's
cold steel rest's, a cage holding
me here, locked on the outside
I sit on my knobby perch,
claws wrapped around tight,
will I ever feel the wind under my
wings again,
will rain drops land gently on
my feathers ever again,
would my wings even flap anymore
if I got the chance,
why hold me,
cage me,
I'd look even more beautiful
if I could fly
cold steel rest's, a cage holding
me here, locked on the outside
I sit on my knobby perch,
claws wrapped around tight,
will I ever feel the wind under my
wings again,
will rain drops land gently on
my feathers ever again,
would my wings even flap anymore
if I got the chance,
why hold me,
cage me,
I'd look even more beautiful
if I could fly
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Re: Fly~
14th Jul 2013 1:47pm
Re: Fly~
14th Jul 2013 3:11pm
Poignant to read - I have just, at home, been coaxing a house martin to fly its way out of a bedroom it flew into headlong. Some furniture was moved in the liberation of that bird!
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14th Jul 2013 7:24pm
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14th Jul 2013 4:16pm
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14th Jul 2013 4:29pm
Re: Fly~
14th Jul 2013 4:33pm
The mythological, phoenix rose from its ashes and once again soared.
Good poem, Tommie... Pan
Good poem, Tommie... Pan
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14th Jul 2013 4:44pm
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14th Jul 2013 8:24pm
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15th Jul 2013 3:53am
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15th Jul 2013 4:19am
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15th Jul 2013 10:17am
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15th Jul 2013 2:38pm
It felt tragic to me...how it longed to be free, maybe it's just me... Free, yea that's how I wanna be... You my dear are a brilliant writer :)
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15th Jul 2013 2:41pm