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Perfect Loveless
Porcelain lady, sharp divine beauty
with cold feet for walking over me.
Fading pilot light,
fingers pointed at self-regarding plane.
Touching mine, kissing yours,
every effort inflicting solace
secretes into my distaste.
Your vital touch
snakes silent spells
breaking my will
to linger
in my perfect loveless.
And when you’re forced to kiss my beard
in our feeble re-enactment of passion,
does the trimmed hairs around my lips
spike loving thoughts,
like a sly drug
rousing tender flashbacks
to when you held true passion
between your lips,
kissing hers?
Published 13th Jul 2013
| Edited 14th Jul 2013
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 5:43pm
13th Jul 2013 10:37pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 18th Jun 2018 7:37pm
14th Jul 2013 7:38am
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14th Jul 2013 8:42am
Thank you for your kind words Winter.
Sorry, I was feeling some very raw emotions when I wrote this piece.
Sorry, I was feeling some very raw emotions when I wrote this piece.
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
14th Jul 2013 11:11am
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14th Jul 2013 12:05pm
14th Jul 2013 10:49pm
15th Jul 2013 11:17am
Yeah, my emotions were pretty raw whilst writing this piece, feelings and thoughts writhing in my head as it came to me.
Thanks Atakti.
Thanks Atakti.
15th Jul 2013 10:03am
Great title for a haunting piece ... There are so many great threads here deftly woven into a fine tapestry.
LSP
LSP
15th Jul 2013 11:20am