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Your Disdain
Your Disdain by Gypsy Red
Such has been your disdain
that you forfeit a promise avowed
without afterthought or refrain.
Cruel beast that you are, villain
care you not for my heart, hollowed
or the sorrow evidently plain?
Poignant this lesson’s pain
that envelopes me like a shroud
not soon will I forget what I now gain.
Fore it follows me life long, like a stain
making me much less proud
until I leave this mortal plane.
Woe fore you became my ruthless bane
through my body and soul you plowed
struggle as I might, it was all in vain.
And now as the light of life does wane
I hear the truth clear and loud
and yes, I am perfectly sane
fore I left my revenge, foreordained.
* for the fixed verse competition
Such has been your disdain
that you forfeit a promise avowed
without afterthought or refrain.
Cruel beast that you are, villain
care you not for my heart, hollowed
or the sorrow evidently plain?
Poignant this lesson’s pain
that envelopes me like a shroud
not soon will I forget what I now gain.
Fore it follows me life long, like a stain
making me much less proud
until I leave this mortal plane.
Woe fore you became my ruthless bane
through my body and soul you plowed
struggle as I might, it was all in vain.
And now as the light of life does wane
I hear the truth clear and loud
and yes, I am perfectly sane
fore I left my revenge, foreordained.
* for the fixed verse competition
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- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
11th Jul 2013 8:53pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
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11th Jul 2013 8:56pm
Ahhh... my Welsh flower, how well we know such miseries. Thank you my sweet fore today I wax poetically lol :P
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11th Jul 2013 11:33pm
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2013 10:13pm
OMGoodness! LOVE THIS! Nuff said! Xo
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11th Jul 2013 11:34pm
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2013 10:15pm
btw.....I love your profile pic! Sexy and sophisticated! ;)
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12th Jul 2013 1:59am
Wowzers this was truly inked in a 'disdain-full' voice, I'd really hate to be the subject of ur ire! lol u don't play woman, seriously deep n powerful verse
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12th Jul 2013 2:01am
Thanks babycakes, yeah that would not be pleasant, but I don't think you would provoke me either. would you? lol
Red
Red
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Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Aug 2018 5:36am
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