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Scratch Your Mark on My Tree
I gaze upon your pearl white skin
As you lay yourself down exposed to me
Opening your gate with an invitation of smiles
A kiss through the air brings your lips closer
Closer I stretch mine to your fluff covered nest
The taste of your glaze just inches away
Your scent fills my head as my nose caresses your flesh
While my fingers dance around your button of love
Running them through your sexy curled hair
My tongue reaching out to meet your moist lips
Your hips pushing closer to feed the flames you inspire
A storm of thunder and lightning bursts in the air
Shaking the darkness with electricity’s sound
The motion now sways in tune with your moans
Nourishing me with your flowing nectar
Let your sweet honey rain down o’er me
Spraying your fountain of liquid colors
With the release of your rainbow
Drowning my throbbing desire
You explode with a glow
As you lay yourself down exposed to me
Opening your gate with an invitation of smiles
A kiss through the air brings your lips closer
Closer I stretch mine to your fluff covered nest
The taste of your glaze just inches away
Your scent fills my head as my nose caresses your flesh
While my fingers dance around your button of love
Running them through your sexy curled hair
My tongue reaching out to meet your moist lips
Your hips pushing closer to feed the flames you inspire
A storm of thunder and lightning bursts in the air
Shaking the darkness with electricity’s sound
The motion now sways in tune with your moans
Nourishing me with your flowing nectar
Let your sweet honey rain down o’er me
Spraying your fountain of liquid colors
With the release of your rainbow
Drowning my throbbing desire
You explode with a glow
Published 8th Jul 2013
| Edited 6th Aug 2014
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8th Jul 2013 2:13am
I was just listening to the song "She's A Rainbow" by the Rolling Stones and this came to mind. It doesn't take much to wash my mind in the gutter... HA! JJ
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
8th Jul 2013 2:22am
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Thank you Gabriel! Glad that you liked it so much. Though I have to give some credit to Mick Jagger for relating the experience to a rainbow. That song is almost as old as me and it took me years to figure out what it was about... lol
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8sZLzfm0GZU
check it out on Youtube if you have never heard it before... JJ
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8sZLzfm0GZU
check it out on Youtube if you have never heard it before... JJ
8th Jul 2013 2:38am
8th Jul 2013 4:06am
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8th Jul 2013 3:42am
"The motion now sways in tune with your moans
Nourishing me with your flowing nectar
Let your sweet honey rain down o’er me
Spraying your fountain of liquid colors
With the release of your rainbow
Drowning my throbbing desire
You explode with a glow"<--DAMN! Those lines were arousing! Xo
It's been so long since I read any of your erotica. Matter-of-fact, I don't know if I EVER read a sexy poem by you! Wow this is umm, umm, HOT! :)
Nourishing me with your flowing nectar
Let your sweet honey rain down o’er me
Spraying your fountain of liquid colors
With the release of your rainbow
Drowning my throbbing desire
You explode with a glow"<--DAMN! Those lines were arousing! Xo
It's been so long since I read any of your erotica. Matter-of-fact, I don't know if I EVER read a sexy poem by you! Wow this is umm, umm, HOT! :)
Thank you so much rain, you brighten my night with sunshowers! I haven't written much erotica lately. There are several in my library, but they are from way back when I first joined up here. That was why I joined the site. I am on a few other poetry sites, but they either don't allow erotica or they make you hide it. So I did a search for erotic poetry on google and this was the first site that popped up. I actually love reading it, but my life hasn't had much passion in it for some time now, so it can be painful to read like listening to love songs when your heart is broken. That one just came to me at the right moment when the right song just happened to be playing. If you look back in my library all the way to the biginning, you'll find about a dozen or so erotic poems posted there. I usually only write when I am experiencing the feelings I am writing about, which is why it is so rare for me to write erotic poems. I could use some love in my life to inspire some sexy words every now and then... JJ
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- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
8th Jul 2013 9:54pm
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9th Jul 2013 7:15pm
Thank you Gail, gutters can be muddy, but then the mud wrestling begins. If yer gonna get dirty, get down and dirty... heheha!!! JJ