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Outside Shower
Slippery body shimmering
outside behind the wooden
door
Pieces of me show in between
the cracks of the wood
cold water trickles over my
hot skin
feeling eyes upon me and
liking it I rub a nice lather of
soap over my curves
I twist to one side and than
lean to the other
bending to the front making
sure to wash my feet giving
my spectator a good show,
wet from head to toe, outside
and inside, I finger my peeping
Tom to join me
outside behind the wooden
door
Pieces of me show in between
the cracks of the wood
cold water trickles over my
hot skin
feeling eyes upon me and
liking it I rub a nice lather of
soap over my curves
I twist to one side and than
lean to the other
bending to the front making
sure to wash my feet giving
my spectator a good show,
wet from head to toe, outside
and inside, I finger my peeping
Tom to join me
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Re: Outside Shower
7th Jul 2013 9:59pm
lol such a sexy taboo...i didnt expect it to go this way...loving this ;-)
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re: Re: Outside Shower
7th Jul 2013 10:02pm
Something very sexy about an outside shower...even if it's just a pipe hanging off the house...I love them!Thanks BZ! ;)
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7th Jul 2013 10:01pm
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7th Jul 2013 10:02pm
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7th Jul 2013 10:18pm
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8th Jul 2013 1:05am
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7th Jul 2013 10:39pm
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8th Jul 2013 00:09am
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7th Jul 2013 11:08pm
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8th Jul 2013 00:09am
Re: Outside Shower
8th Jul 2013 2:47am
Jeepers peepers!!! A voyars dream come true. Very seductive and inviting! I think I need to take a shower... JJ
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8th Jul 2013 2:52am
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8th Jul 2013 3:04am
Re: Outside Shower
8th Jul 2013 3:00pm
Mmmmm this was spicy... Sure it was me peeping n invited in lol excellent imagery!
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8th Jul 2013 4:03pm