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Ashes to Ashes
The myriad of pages burning contain
my written sorrows and scribed pain,
they leave nothing in their dark wake
but bitter betrayal and lingering shame.
Memories torment me time and again
tears that fall without pause or refrain,
leaving their indelible salt laden stain
of failed attempts to recapture a love feigned
You who were my hearts only chatelaine;
the purest love that I could have offered
you have, with no remorse, mercilessly slain,
now have become my life story’s villain.
For you my purpose has run its course,
seeking a new love to quicken you again,
a deep wound you carved in my soul
and on my chest a spreading bloodstain.
I, struck down by surprise as was Able
by your vicious maliciousness, my Cain,
I was left in a pool of pain unimaginable
that threatened to keep me enchained.
Leveling harsh insults feeling a violent disdain,
I was not your type you said when asked to explain.
The agony and shock were truly inhumain
after years of imagined love the truth was plain.
You had decided without a moments restrain
to destroy my confidence with no remorse
alone now I am laid low, my future uncertain
like a million pieces of porcelain, I am broken.
How do I, my needed confidence reattain?
I conclude that from love I must abstain,
the tears continue to fall like midnight rain,
who I see in the mirror is still just plain Jane.
I am tiered; my spirit is weary and drained
all I want now is to sleep the eternal sleep
leave behind the lifelong cruelty of this domain
and there from the burden become unchained .
Maybe then, in solitude my inner peace I will regain
forgetting the love that became a pungent bane.
Let these bitter words formed into sad quatrains
burn into ashes so their power never again has reign.
Gypsy Red
my written sorrows and scribed pain,
they leave nothing in their dark wake
but bitter betrayal and lingering shame.
Memories torment me time and again
tears that fall without pause or refrain,
leaving their indelible salt laden stain
of failed attempts to recapture a love feigned
You who were my hearts only chatelaine;
the purest love that I could have offered
you have, with no remorse, mercilessly slain,
now have become my life story’s villain.
For you my purpose has run its course,
seeking a new love to quicken you again,
a deep wound you carved in my soul
and on my chest a spreading bloodstain.
I, struck down by surprise as was Able
by your vicious maliciousness, my Cain,
I was left in a pool of pain unimaginable
that threatened to keep me enchained.
Leveling harsh insults feeling a violent disdain,
I was not your type you said when asked to explain.
The agony and shock were truly inhumain
after years of imagined love the truth was plain.
You had decided without a moments restrain
to destroy my confidence with no remorse
alone now I am laid low, my future uncertain
like a million pieces of porcelain, I am broken.
How do I, my needed confidence reattain?
I conclude that from love I must abstain,
the tears continue to fall like midnight rain,
who I see in the mirror is still just plain Jane.
I am tiered; my spirit is weary and drained
all I want now is to sleep the eternal sleep
leave behind the lifelong cruelty of this domain
and there from the burden become unchained .
Maybe then, in solitude my inner peace I will regain
forgetting the love that became a pungent bane.
Let these bitter words formed into sad quatrains
burn into ashes so their power never again has reign.
Gypsy Red
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Re: Ashes to Ashes
3rd Jul 2013 00:50am
Too deep! Amazing writing!
I like the emphasis on the inner pain the internal struggle to gain true happiness only in vain. Beautiful!
I like the emphasis on the inner pain the internal struggle to gain true happiness only in vain. Beautiful!
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3rd Jul 2013 1:37am
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3rd Jul 2013 1:37am
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3rd Jul 2013 1:36am
It did... Once the emotions took hold it is like opening flood gates, there is no stopping it.Thanks Naajir.
Red
Red
Re: Ashes to Ashes
3rd Jul 2013 1:46am
Wow! What an amazing poem! I love the emotion, conveyed so well through selectively chosen words & rhyme. It's great. Well done.
I love the photo you used as well, it really helps add an atmosphere to the poem. Really makes you see the purples & indigo's seep through the words.
I love the photo you used as well, it really helps add an atmosphere to the poem. Really makes you see the purples & indigo's seep through the words.
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re: Re: Ashes to Ashes
3rd Jul 2013 1:55am
Thank you so very much you are very kind I do try to bring forward my best work.
Red
Red
Re: Ashes to Ashes
3rd Jul 2013 2:05am
This is deeply felt and overstood Sis....
You have such a beautiful way with words....
even painfilled ones...
Fire
You have such a beautiful way with words....
even painfilled ones...
Fire
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3rd Jul 2013 2:33am
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re: Re: Ashes to Ashes
3rd Jul 2013 2:35am
Yeah the kind of peace that come when something ends and the healing can begin. Thanks Strider.
Red
Red
Re: Ashes to Ashes
3rd Jul 2013 5:48am
O Dear Red...Deep...hurts to see no matter how eloquent You weave...and truly the Pen bleeds Your Wonderful Heart, stay well and Be strong!!!
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re: Re: Ashes to Ashes
3rd Jul 2013 11:49am
You are extremely sweet Soul and I thought I was being subtle lol guess not. I get better everyday but sometimes the old insecurities come a calling.
Thanks for the comment.
Red
Thanks for the comment.
Red
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3rd Jul 2013 2:10pm
emotions drive the true Pen eh?
hehehe subtle--for You...i would imagine so ;)
hehehe subtle--for You...i would imagine so ;)
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3rd Jul 2013 3:35pm
Ohhh... you know me so well lolol I am about as subtle as a "bull in a China shop"lolol :-)
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2013 7:02am
Yeah; What Abyss, HotNess, Naajir, tplover, Firebyrd, Strider and Soul said!
They took my words! Xoxoxoxo
You're a BAD WOMAN! Love This!!!! :)
They took my words! Xoxoxoxo
You're a BAD WOMAN! Love This!!!! :)
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3rd Jul 2013 11:52am
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re: Re: Ashes to Ashes
3rd Jul 2013 11:54am
Yes those of us who suffered such things know these feelings intimately, thank you so much Magda, slowly but surely the healing has begun.
Red
Red
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3rd Jul 2013 9:09am
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3rd Jul 2013 11:58am
Brinda thank you! When I wrote this I did not realize that it would eminate such powerful feelings. Now I am glad it did.
Red
Red
Re: Ashes to Ashes
3rd Jul 2013 12:03pm
N although you're mired in sufferage n pain
You go on with life with love the ultimate gain
n if never to be forever you tried
to have known it once, a beautiful visage before
it died... Yea... Feeling you 100 on this my sweet
Gypsy...
You go on with life with love the ultimate gain
n if never to be forever you tried
to have known it once, a beautiful visage before
it died... Yea... Feeling you 100 on this my sweet
Gypsy...
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re: Re: Ashes to Ashes
3rd Jul 2013 3:38pm
Luv ya bunches Poe, this kinda snuck up on me and like so many others, it took on a life of its own.
Thanks for the love.
Red
Thanks for the love.
Red
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3rd Jul 2013 12:12pm
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3rd Jul 2013 3:39pm
Re: Ashes to Ashes
3rd Jul 2013 5:38pm
fantastic words as always, the quest for inner piece never ends.
great work red
marcus
great work red
marcus
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3rd Jul 2013 6:39pm