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ENOUGH
(visual poem)
One last tear
Leaves her eyelash
Finds her way across her cheek
When it touches the ground
Scatters into numerous pieces
She finally detached herself
After all these years
One last tear
Leaves her eyelash
Finds her way across her cheek
When it touches the ground
Scatters into numerous pieces
She finally detached herself
After all these years
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re: Re: ENOUGH
1st Jul 2013 9:23pm
Re: ENOUGH
1st Jul 2013 9:29pm
The mystique of the words just have this energy
The goodbye tear
The cleansing complete tear
The new beginnings tear that is wiping the past way
Your writings are a cluster of awe and mystery
The goodbye tear
The cleansing complete tear
The new beginnings tear that is wiping the past way
Your writings are a cluster of awe and mystery
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re: Re: ENOUGH
1st Jul 2013 9:36pm
But still you recognize part of yourself inbetween the lines... right? Or so I wish... ;-)
Re: ENOUGH
2nd Jul 2013 2:48am
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2nd Jul 2013 9:34pm
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- Edited 16th May 2018 11:39am
2nd Jul 2013 5:46am
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re: Re: ENOUGH
2nd Jul 2013 9:37pm
Re: ENOUGH
Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Jul 2013 6:12am
2nd Jul 2013 6:00am
Dammit man!!! You had me reading this one twice too! *Note to self* Read all of Inkstitution's poems when not sipping wine. lol...
That one tear held a lot of pain; 'enough' to hold the soul hostage. Once released, the healing could begin.
I adore your work! Xo
That one tear held a lot of pain; 'enough' to hold the soul hostage. Once released, the healing could begin.
I adore your work! Xo
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re: Re: ENOUGH
2nd Jul 2013 9:40pm
Make note myself: make poems that fit with good wine. My next one will be the test. Lets toast if I succeed, ok? ;-)
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2nd Jul 2013 10:21am
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re: Re: ENOUGH
2nd Jul 2013 9:42pm
Re: ENOUGH
16th Jul 2013 4:53am
I absolutely love this. That last tear served as a ticket to a new journey, new triumph. Wonderful.....absolutely wonderful and once again the image connecting with the words made it even more powerful and beautiful.
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re: Re: ENOUGH
16th Jul 2013 11:59am
Thank you, lady! :-) It is so nice that even within a few words, I notice that you can relate to what I am trying to bring across. Thank you for liking my personal photography as amplifier (;o) for the words and viceversa. Big Kiss for that