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'Poetic Buffet'
note: (this is a mixture of poetic style all in one, acrostic, couplelet and freeverse...hope THAT makes it easier to comprehend :) )
R~eady, get set to move on...
I~nfantile behavior be gone!
S~alvation be the light.
E~bullient tendencies are left... right?
A~utonomous thought set in...
G~enial mindset an apparent sin.
A~llocate mixed emotions for their proper order.
I~mplausible possibilities head south of the border!
N~ow is the time for the poet to speak...
they say he do as he do, so many haven't a clue
why is it that he won't accept leaving behind a few?
to seek knowledge, is a trip that he'll ever take
sometimes he fails but, won't slam on the brake
he's a part of a whole... succinct with the rest
reeping the praise, ah yeah they passed the test
singleminded goal to be openminded not blinded
by simpleminded folk who don't search to find it
again he's a eater of knowledge, yet always ready to share
feeder to the many, heart full of love with plenty to spare...
I walk through life with my head in the clouds....
ask a lot of questions, yet answers uncertain...
yes, love is beautiful as much as it hurts,
so I'm gonna follow a path no matter where it leads
as I suck in fresh air...
take in all that there is, and then live til I die.
R~eady, get set to move on...
I~nfantile behavior be gone!
S~alvation be the light.
E~bullient tendencies are left... right?
A~utonomous thought set in...
G~enial mindset an apparent sin.
A~llocate mixed emotions for their proper order.
I~mplausible possibilities head south of the border!
N~ow is the time for the poet to speak...
they say he do as he do, so many haven't a clue
why is it that he won't accept leaving behind a few?
to seek knowledge, is a trip that he'll ever take
sometimes he fails but, won't slam on the brake
he's a part of a whole... succinct with the rest
reeping the praise, ah yeah they passed the test
singleminded goal to be openminded not blinded
by simpleminded folk who don't search to find it
again he's a eater of knowledge, yet always ready to share
feeder to the many, heart full of love with plenty to spare...
I walk through life with my head in the clouds....
ask a lot of questions, yet answers uncertain...
yes, love is beautiful as much as it hurts,
so I'm gonna follow a path no matter where it leads
as I suck in fresh air...
take in all that there is, and then live til I die.
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1st Jul 2013 4:03pm
Thank my sweet flowergirl I really appreciate yourcontinued support lady :)
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1st Jul 2013 3:19pm
Show off! hahaha flexin them skills to impress the flock? hahash nicely done though!
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2nd Jul 2013 12:08pm
Me? Nah I don't flex, I reflect on my thoughts n attempt to convey them artistically :) lol
Thank U my poetic wunderkind, u be Da best! :)
Thank U my poetic wunderkind, u be Da best! :)
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1st Jul 2013 5:16pm
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2nd Jul 2013 12:10pm
Happy u liked Anita, I can truly say you make me feel
so good, knowing I have ur continued support :)
so good, knowing I have ur continued support :)
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2nd Jul 2013 12:11pm
I can't believe you'd ever doubt! lmao jk... Thank u my sweetie, u lil sexy woman u! :)
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1st Jul 2013 8:03pm
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1st Jul 2013 9:16pm
I love it! The different styles, the rhythm, the message...simply put it is great
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2nd Jul 2013 12:13pm
I'm pleased you did n u got me doing the two step
in rhythm with the sweet sounds of ur praise! lol
Appreciate u beautiful one :)
in rhythm with the sweet sounds of ur praise! lol
Appreciate u beautiful one :)
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 11:08pm
YUP! Just like a buffet, a little of everythang'!
I want a second serving....!
Incredible Ink!
I want a second serving....!
Incredible Ink!
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2nd Jul 2013 12:15pm
Well my queen, I live to serve you! Here, have at it! lol
Thank you muah!! ur soooo wonderful n sweet lady :)
Thank you muah!! ur soooo wonderful n sweet lady :)