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BLEEDING SWEETNESS
Your words drag a dull blade
across my existence.
Do you know who I am?
I'm cowering to the serenade,
of your addictions.
Crushing stars in my hand.
All of that innocence lost,
all of the memories,
you try so hard to forget.
The drugs,and the spirits that haunt,
they weigh so heavy,
when the dawn brings them all back again.
We are waiting for it all to burn.
Separated by many miles.
Though I can taste all your tears in the rain,
and I'm there with you,getting high.
Every drop of your bleeding sweetness.
Every consequence,
seems more vivid at 5am.
If I could drown all of your bitter secrets,
through my benevolence,
feel you smile sincere once again.
We are waiting for the same kind of flame.
As the dust now falls from my hands.
Every moment that withers away
Brittanie...Can you hear me?
across my existence.
Do you know who I am?
I'm cowering to the serenade,
of your addictions.
Crushing stars in my hand.
All of that innocence lost,
all of the memories,
you try so hard to forget.
The drugs,and the spirits that haunt,
they weigh so heavy,
when the dawn brings them all back again.
We are waiting for it all to burn.
Separated by many miles.
Though I can taste all your tears in the rain,
and I'm there with you,getting high.
Every drop of your bleeding sweetness.
Every consequence,
seems more vivid at 5am.
If I could drown all of your bitter secrets,
through my benevolence,
feel you smile sincere once again.
We are waiting for the same kind of flame.
As the dust now falls from my hands.
Every moment that withers away
Brittanie...Can you hear me?
Published 29th Jun 2013
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29th Jun 2013 11:30pm
Jasper, my Friend,
The sorrow and desperation of this piece has touched me soul-deep.
Your poem expresses an emotional level of caring that is soo intense....feelings that transcend all the barriers as the poet attempts to re- establish the link between himself , and the girl that he loves...trying soo hard to reach her..to convince her ...to save her from her demons.....while time still remains.
"...If I could drown your bitter secrets/through my benevolence/feel you smile sincere once again...." These lines are so vivid and poignant! They are another example of your outstanding signature style--the ability express such deep emotions!
Well penned! Keep sharing...please!
The sorrow and desperation of this piece has touched me soul-deep.
Your poem expresses an emotional level of caring that is soo intense....feelings that transcend all the barriers as the poet attempts to re- establish the link between himself , and the girl that he loves...trying soo hard to reach her..to convince her ...to save her from her demons.....while time still remains.
"...If I could drown your bitter secrets/through my benevolence/feel you smile sincere once again...." These lines are so vivid and poignant! They are another example of your outstanding signature style--the ability express such deep emotions!
Well penned! Keep sharing...please!
30th Jun 2013 2:33am
Thank you Enchantress;)It's a strange kind of attraction,for another,riddled with pain...I hope she hears;)
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30th Jun 2013 2:31am
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30th Jun 2013 6:32am
This was so sweet! Thank you, I can't even remember the last time someone wrote about me. Haha
30th Jun 2013 6:10pm