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BROKEN HALO
(visual poem)
Angel heart
Fallen by mistake
Flames left a scent
And the stain won’t fade
Will time manage
Make her fly again
She needs those wings
To purify
Angel heart
Fallen by mistake
Flames left a scent
And the stain won’t fade
Will time manage
Make her fly again
She needs those wings
To purify
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Re: BROKEN HALO
25th Jun 2013 7:30pm
Ahhh
your poetry excites me & pisses me off
So much captured in so little words
makes it awesome
it pisses me off cos' of the mystery it has to it
excuse me for being greedy and wanting more
lol good write
your poetry excites me & pisses me off
So much captured in so little words
makes it awesome
it pisses me off cos' of the mystery it has to it
excuse me for being greedy and wanting more
lol good write
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re: Re: BROKEN HALO
25th Jun 2013 8:25pm
LOL!!!
I do apologize for aiming for that response...
LOL!!!
But I do thank you for that too
;-)
I do apologize for aiming for that response...
LOL!!!
But I do thank you for that too
;-)
Re: BROKEN HALO
25th Jun 2013 7:53pm
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25th Jun 2013 8:26pm
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25th Jun 2013 8:07pm
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25th Jun 2013 8:28pm
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25th Jun 2013 8:08pm
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re: Re: BROKEN HALO
25th Jun 2013 8:29pm
The strong ones always do. The less fortunate need our warm assistance...
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25th Jun 2013 9:49pm
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25th Jun 2013 9:51pm
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26th Jun 2013 00:12am
re: Re: BROKEN HALO
26th Jun 2013 2:34pm
Thank you! 'Conveyed' what a lovely word... My English is improving here. I might use it in future work!
Thanks ;-) Also for enjoying my post
Thanks ;-) Also for enjoying my post
Re: BROKEN HALO
Anonymous
26th Jun 2013 2:25am
Flawless...........xoxo
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re: Re: BROKEN HALO
26th Jun 2013 2:35pm
Re: BROKEN HALO
26th Jun 2013 2:28pm
Within the depths of 'DARKNESS'...(evil), the innocent seem to fall the hardest--the deepest. But time, love, (and acceptance) bring the Light to heal the 'wings' of broken spirits.
Touching...(an almost poignant plea) Felt this one, soul-deep.
Touching...(an almost poignant plea) Felt this one, soul-deep.
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26th Jun 2013 2:36pm
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27th Jun 2013 11:16am
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