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The Forever Effect
Sometimes it's big
sometimes it's subtle
your presence can affect
maybe you're unaware
but you should know
existence creates causes and effects
it's a continuous loop
so take the time to reflect
who, how and what do you effect?
there will always be retrospect
to be remembered
what do you expect?
Published 24th Jun 2013
| Edited 14th Aug 2014
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25th Jun 2013 2:57pm
You're not dying, are you, Mike? Just kidding! It's really a thought provoking piece. Nice work!
Thank you, Blondie! But am I dying? Yes...one day I'm sure I will. Although, this poem is also about any impression that we might have on others. All of us leave memories in the minds of some of the people that we deal with throughout life. So, it's usually a good idea to leave a good impression. Unless you just prefer to be thought of as an asshole...which at times, for most of us, it's probably something that we wouldn't have to work too hard at to accomplish. If enough people think valid, bad thoughts about a particular someone...the more negative the karma will be for that particular someone. And bad karma ALWAYS fucks over those who have it!
