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TRUE LOVE
They were to young it was said
it would never last
they were too young to wed
she is still in her teens
but the wedding went ahead.
A baby girl was born
a few years later a baby boy
they were happy and in love.
They had problems but coped
tackled each problem with hope .
The daughter now had children
the parents happy with grandchildren
then tragedy struck them hard
the son was killed in a accident
they struggled again with life
it seemed harder for the wife
two years after she died with cancer
she left a love letter for her husband
declaring her love through the years
true love will always shine through for everyone
it would never last
they were too young to wed
she is still in her teens
but the wedding went ahead.
A baby girl was born
a few years later a baby boy
they were happy and in love.
They had problems but coped
tackled each problem with hope .
The daughter now had children
the parents happy with grandchildren
then tragedy struck them hard
the son was killed in a accident
they struggled again with life
it seemed harder for the wife
two years after she died with cancer
she left a love letter for her husband
declaring her love through the years
true love will always shine through for everyone
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23rd Jun 2013 2:32pm
While reading this I couldn't get Nat King Cole singing, "Too Young" out of my head. Only the strongest cynic can't be moved by this composition.
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24th Jun 2013 1:19pm
The expression of "forever" is poignantly highlighted here
well done my friend, on a very moving ink.
well done my friend, on a very moving ink.
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