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HALF OF ME
(visual poem)
Until this is over
This is what I’ll show
This is what you’ll see
All that’s left
Of what used to be
Until this is over
This is what I’ll show
This is what you’ll see
All that’s left
Of what used to be
Published 22nd Jun 2013
| Edited 25th Jun 2013
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Anonymous
22nd Jun 2013 11:02pm
hmmm....interesting! Would love to see more!
btw...have a poem with exact same title, similar in image, of course totally different message! Xo
Welcome to DUP! :)
btw...have a poem with exact same title, similar in image, of course totally different message! Xo
Welcome to DUP! :)
22nd Jun 2013 11:09pm
Just read that... different message, but strong contents.
Thank you. For being interested, for wanting to see more (there is one more already til they allow me to post again ;-)) and for showing me yours. I took the liberty of following you, hope you don't mind.
Glad to be here ;-)
Thank you. For being interested, for wanting to see more (there is one more already til they allow me to post again ;-)) and for showing me yours. I took the liberty of following you, hope you don't mind.
Glad to be here ;-)
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
22nd Jun 2013 11:13pm
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22nd Jun 2013 11:19pm
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 11:39am
23rd Jun 2013 00:12am
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23rd Jun 2013 00:19am
Thank you Minou.. sometimes less is more. In my case: more is definitely less.. ;-)
Thanks for your positive response! I think I'll enjoy being here already ;-)
Thanks for your positive response! I think I'll enjoy being here already ;-)
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
23rd Jun 2013 5:58pm
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23rd Jun 2013 8:14pm
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
24th Jun 2013 5:53pm
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24th Jun 2013 6:12pm
And your defense mechanism switches on. And always brings you to more fertile waters...
Thank you, lady. I like your responses.
Thank you, lady. I like your responses.
Anonymous
- Edited 17th May 2018 7:35pm
1st Jul 2013 11:11pm
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1st Jul 2013 11:27pm
Yes, it is... Luckily passion is an energy that does not allow to stay hidden for a long time... ;-)
Call it recovery time ...
Call it recovery time ...