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Surrendered Childhood
Under your hate and greed there was a childhood surrendered
For without you, childhood would have been much more to render
It appears at first not a bruise nor splinter
yet
Inside the fire will never cease to rise
All of the tears you made stream from those precious eyes
And you never stopped for a minute to ask why
Why do you put this child through such pain and denial
You continue to provide tribulation and trial
And then you go out and deny any revile
And it seems that no one will be there to mend
All the pain and suffering that you made begin
Just know that you will be the one suffering in the end
For without you, childhood would have been much more to render
It appears at first not a bruise nor splinter
yet
Inside the fire will never cease to rise
All of the tears you made stream from those precious eyes
And you never stopped for a minute to ask why
Why do you put this child through such pain and denial
You continue to provide tribulation and trial
And then you go out and deny any revile
And it seems that no one will be there to mend
All the pain and suffering that you made begin
Just know that you will be the one suffering in the end
Published 18th Jun 2013
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18th Jun 2013 4:36am
I want to cry
All of the tears you made stream from those precious eyes
And you never stopped for a minute to ask why
Why do you put this child through such pain and denial
You continue to provide tribulation and trial
heartbreakingly sad
with anger peeking out too
emotional piece for sure
good job
All of the tears you made stream from those precious eyes
And you never stopped for a minute to ask why
Why do you put this child through such pain and denial
You continue to provide tribulation and trial
heartbreakingly sad
with anger peeking out too
emotional piece for sure
good job
18th Jun 2013 4:41am
Very emotional piece
I see bottled up pain trying to speak out
Nice write good job
Keep it up
I see bottled up pain trying to speak out
Nice write good job
Keep it up
18th Jun 2013 4:46am
Wow this work is one that could speak to many different souls cause we all have that time when we feel like this. Nice read.
18th Jun 2013 4:48am
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18th Jun 2013 4:56am
Very Nice Ink! Xo
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