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An emptiness

An empty bed�
An empty room�

An empty heart�
An empty soul�

Lonely hands and lonely dreams.
Lonely beats of the heart.

Before that love and pain.
Before that fire and passion.

And in this emptiness loads of memories.
I touch the memories, I touch the feelings, I touch the infinity.

I banish the memories, I sink in the emptiness.
I live in the emptiness, there is nothing and everything.

Written by josephine

Published 17th Jun 2013

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Re: An emptiness

SuiGen (Terry)

17th Jun 2013 11:59pm

Meditation is hard work at first and it seems that you are practicing. A very good descriptive write.

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josephine

18th Jun 2013 00:37am

To be honest, the meditation is one of my best friends :))) Thanks for this comment!

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Re: An emptiness

Solomon_Song

18th Jun 2013 10:08pm

Before I caught on to the meditative nature of your poem, I was thinking with the tune in my mind of The Police (early 1980s) song "The bed's too big without you."

Favourite lines:

"Before that love and pain,
Before that fire and passion." (In the poem it is the Then amidst the remainder of the poem's Now.)

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josephine

19th Jun 2013 1:24am

Thanks for reading. I like meditation, but my poem has nothing to do with my meditation :). I did not know this song unfortunately :), but I liked it. And the bed sometimes is too big indeed :)))

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- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm

18th Jun 2013 11:16pm

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