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what (is it) makes the sun
what (is it)
makes the sun warmer?
what (is it???)
makes the grass greener
what (is it) makes the stars
shine (so much) brighter
at night (when holding
hands with another???)
why is it we are in love
when we think
we are in love
and everything is better
and brighter when seen
through the eyes of love?
makes the sun warmer?
what (is it???)
makes the grass greener
what (is it) makes the stars
shine (so much) brighter
at night (when holding
hands with another???)
why is it we are in love
when we think
we are in love
and everything is better
and brighter when seen
through the eyes of love?
Published 17th Jun 2013
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
17th Jun 2013 8:22pm
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17th Jun 2013 8:25pm
You are always so sweet, Gabe! Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks. I truly appreciate them. xo
Faith
Faith
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 00:09am
17th Jun 2013 8:34pm
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17th Jun 2013 9:13pm
You are so right about it changing the heart. I was trying to capture that magical feeling in these words. Love makes everything seem wonderful! So pleased you enjoyed my little poem.
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
17th Jun 2013 8:39pm
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17th Jun 2013 9:14pm
18th Jun 2013 00:14am
love burns bright within the soul and makes everything sooo much better!
Great write Faith!.
Cheers! Scot.
Great write Faith!.
Cheers! Scot.
18th Jun 2013 3:26am
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 9:39pm
18th Jun 2013 11:29am
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18th Jun 2013 2:25pm
Thank you so much, Mourganna. So wonderful to see you have graced my page with your presence. Love-Faith
18th Jun 2013 2:08pm
18th Jun 2013 2:26pm
Thank you very much, Amazon. I appreciate your comment very much. Love-Faith
Anonymous
25th Jun 2013 1:00am
Love is so beautiful, that it shines brighter than the sun.....
Nice write dear Faith! xo
Nice write dear Faith! xo
25th Jun 2013 1:47am