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Hard Slow Rain
You drip from the stubble on my chin
As I move up to nestle close
Licking yourself from my sweetened mouth
The want grasping, pulling me nearer.
Easily full to overflowing, dripping more
Knowing I'm the harder for your taste
Deep the long intended grinding
Clutching throats to fight the pleasing.
Methodically paced and patient strokes
Revealing nerves never touched before
Whispering applause with lightened grips
You drip again from the hard slow rain.
As I move up to nestle close
Licking yourself from my sweetened mouth
The want grasping, pulling me nearer.
Easily full to overflowing, dripping more
Knowing I'm the harder for your taste
Deep the long intended grinding
Clutching throats to fight the pleasing.
Methodically paced and patient strokes
Revealing nerves never touched before
Whispering applause with lightened grips
You drip again from the hard slow rain.
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Re: Hard Slow Rain
Anonymous
17th Jun 2013 8:12pm
Oh My DaYuM!
My throat is parched....
My throat is parched....
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17th Jun 2013 8:15pm
Anonymous
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re: Re: Hard Slow Rain
17th Jun 2013 8:51pm
Never been accused if being classy, miss. I will take that as a compliment! Thank you.
Re: Hard Slow Rain
17th Jun 2013 9:46pm
Love how it drips from your stubble!
And those untouched nerves...very nice!
And those untouched nerves...very nice!
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