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Fuck Fathers Day
I've got a ice berg vulva sac for every abandoned child in this realm
To freeze the excruciating absence
Of flying bug eating Freuds that should tend to them
Every breed is unwelcomed
And born without a promise
Come to me where no lost man could ever measure, sweet child
As I battled death such as you do
Maybe this holiday should be banned.
Maybe even Mothers Day, even though its no one's fault that my mother was a selfish whore.
Maybe there would be more mortal dicks to where this day came from.
Fuck Father's day.
To freeze the excruciating absence
Of flying bug eating Freuds that should tend to them
Every breed is unwelcomed
And born without a promise
Come to me where no lost man could ever measure, sweet child
As I battled death such as you do
Maybe this holiday should be banned.
Maybe even Mothers Day, even though its no one's fault that my mother was a selfish whore.
Maybe there would be more mortal dicks to where this day came from.
Fuck Father's day.
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Re: Fuck Fathers Day
17th Jun 2013 2:34am
You know Clio --- I actually wouldn't mind getting fucked today : > )
But seriously....... your syntax is as riveting and breathtaking as always !
`Nuff Respect !
But seriously....... your syntax is as riveting and breathtaking as always !
`Nuff Respect !
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re: Re: Fuck Fathers Day
17th Jun 2013 8:13pm
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18th Jun 2013 10:23pm
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that's ok clio --- we ALL are perverts in SOMEBODY`s eyes!!!
Anyway -- I was just seeing your title literally
"Fuck Fathers Day" --- its a joke!
Anyway -- I was just seeing your title literally
"Fuck Fathers Day" --- its a joke!
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Re: Fuck Fathers Day
17th Jun 2013 2:26pm
Maybe we should just re-produce asexually. Then we could have a go fuck ourself holiday every year. Nice work. Keep it coming.
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17th Jun 2013 8:11pm
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re: Re: Fuck Fathers Day
18th Jun 2013 10:21pm
Your very welcome. I'm glad this poem , among any of my poems, spoke out to someone. And yes I have my own reasons. I find the day useless and offensive to thousands of children out there who dont have a father. I believe that society makes that those not having a father mean that they are disadvantaged in life. That is so not true. I believe I don't need any kind of god for anything. I'll take care of myself.
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18th Jun 2013 11:17pm
Aaahhh i see. That's cool! I never knew that. I learned something today haha. I should spread the word. Are you asian?
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