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Out of Sight
“Welcome, step into my parlor”
said she to her gentleman caller.
This night, I shall rewrite
all that you have known
about insipid love and lovers
who have been lukewarm .
You will be introduced
to a passion like no other,
afterwards you shant
be any good for another.
The gentleman caller
hesitates unsure of
what being said and
in trepidation falters.
Locking into him with
her golden bedroom eyes
they become lipid honey pools
that mesmerize,
while the fire he sees
within them intensifies.
She walks around him
soft and slow letting him take in
her warm glow, the scent
of sandalwood and flowers,
the heady scent that
he greedily devours.
The patchouli candles
complete the aromascape
bathing the room in
an incandescent glow
that cast shadows
on the soft fabric drapes.
She circles once more, the soft
rustle of her gossamer gown
announces how precariously
close he is to the sound.
His heart races with excitement
at this cat and mouse game,
what is yet to be determined,
who predator and who is prey.
Oh… he has a power all his own,
his body exudes raw masculinity;
he carries himself like a true divinity,
his cologne and body scent
entice her desires and heighten
her sexual pleasure quotient.
He is a god, Eros incarnate.
said she to her gentleman caller.
This night, I shall rewrite
all that you have known
about insipid love and lovers
who have been lukewarm .
You will be introduced
to a passion like no other,
afterwards you shant
be any good for another.
The gentleman caller
hesitates unsure of
what being said and
in trepidation falters.
Locking into him with
her golden bedroom eyes
they become lipid honey pools
that mesmerize,
while the fire he sees
within them intensifies.
She walks around him
soft and slow letting him take in
her warm glow, the scent
of sandalwood and flowers,
the heady scent that
he greedily devours.
The patchouli candles
complete the aromascape
bathing the room in
an incandescent glow
that cast shadows
on the soft fabric drapes.
She circles once more, the soft
rustle of her gossamer gown
announces how precariously
close he is to the sound.
His heart races with excitement
at this cat and mouse game,
what is yet to be determined,
who predator and who is prey.
Oh… he has a power all his own,
his body exudes raw masculinity;
he carries himself like a true divinity,
his cologne and body scent
entice her desires and heighten
her sexual pleasure quotient.
He is a god, Eros incarnate.
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Re: Out of Sight
12th Jun 2013 2:35am
WHOOOOOOA MAMA!
Ay Carambe!....Muy Caliente!
Si Senorita!
Mucho Amour!
XOXO
Fire
Ay Carambe!....Muy Caliente!
Si Senorita!
Mucho Amour!
XOXO
Fire
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re: Re: Out of Sight
12th Jun 2013 2:42am
Si mami muy caliente! lololol Thanks fire for reading and for the great comment.:-)
Red
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2013 4:22am
Sexy ass! #thatIsAll ;)
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Re: Out of Sight
12th Jun 2013 4:58am
So Like...Your computer doesn't melt when You set it to fire like this???
Intricate and Passionate Write Dear Red!!!
Intricate and Passionate Write Dear Red!!!
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re: Re: Out of Sight
12th Jun 2013 5:40am
I am on my second extinguisher now Soul, there was a few sparks but I got under control. :-) Thanks for stopping by!
Red
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re: Re: Out of Sight
12th Jun 2013 1:41pm
Hahaha coming from the lady who has the boys panting...lolol that's funny!:-) Thank you my dear.
Red
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Re: Out of Sight
12th Jun 2013 1:05pm
The slow seductive ambience of this while clearly intentful STILL left me with a hunger n anxiety that wanted to see its pleasurable end lol but of course u just had to leave me 'hangin' lol
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12th Jun 2013 1:46pm
Ohhh po baby....awwww fill in the blanks lolol. Thanks babes for the great comment. :-)
Red
Red
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Re: Out of Sight
12th Jun 2013 6:38pm
Wow. Every word conjures up visual images in my mind that evoke strong desires.
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re: Re: Out of Sight
12th Jun 2013 7:06pm
Lol I have penchant for painting images with my words I thrilled you enjoyed this piece.
Red
Red
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Oh!!! I love it, I love it!!! Too much fun! Naajir you made my night with this comment!!!hahaha Well my friend as I see it, I can finish it and throw you into total melt down OR you can add your own spin hmmm? Now you can really say I am a troublemaker! And it is TRULY MY PLEASURE! HAHAHA
Red :-)
Red :-)
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Anonymous
13th Jun 2013 7:12pm
Red hot as only a redhead can do ... bravo!!!
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re: Re: Out of Sight
13th Jun 2013 7:49pm
My naughty Colonel! Glad to see you, I knew this was right up you alley hahaha Thanks Mark your sweetie!
Red
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