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Unrepentant Sinner (She's not picking up, call back later)
I inhale the promise of cocoa
dreams, eyes half-lidded
as my lips close around
satin smoothness.
My insides melt... this
is naughty nougat heat.
Brittle, soft shivers follow
rice crisp racing pulses...
Caramel kisses are mine, but
I want more. I seek the curve
of almond crunches, willingly
succumbing to chocolate
wickedness...
Entry in the "Evilly Delicious" comp
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Re: Unrepentant Sinner (She's not picking up, call back later)
11th Jun 2013 6:14am
Ha! Awesome! I get the same feeling when I drink Vodka! Great as usual, Mike.
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re: Re: Unrepentant Sinner (She's not picking up, call back later)
11th Jun 2013 2:50pm
Omg, been off the sugar for three weeks and dying for some chocolate... Worked from memory, but if I read this poem I may succumb!
Thanks, Mike. :)
Thanks, Mike. :)
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re: Re: Unrepentant Sinner (She's not picking up, call back later)
11th Jun 2013 2:53pm
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11th Jun 2013 10:54am
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11th Jun 2013 2:53pm
Re: Unrepentant Sinner (She's not picking up, call back later)
11th Jun 2013 1:27pm
AAHHhhhhhhh!!! C H O C O L A T E !!!! The very word causes me to tremble in anticipation--soo deliciously decadent...just like your poem !
i wish you the very best of luck in the competition!!!
(Ummmm...Now, where did i stash that last "Kit-Kat" ???)
i wish you the very best of luck in the competition!!!
(Ummmm...Now, where did i stash that last "Kit-Kat" ???)
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re: Re: Unrepentant Sinner (She's not picking up, call back later)
11th Jun 2013 2:55pm
Argh, chocolate attack, addict in withdrawal, poet down, poet down!!
*faint whisper* thank you, DK....
*faint whisper* thank you, DK....
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11th Jun 2013 9:17pm
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re: Re: Unrepentant Sinner (She's not picking up, call back later)
13th Jun 2013 7:04pm
Oh, Indie, so pleased you noticed just how far the wickedness extends...
;)
Thank you so much for your kind comments.
;)
Thank you so much for your kind comments.
Re: Unrepentant Sinner (She's not picking up, call back later)
13th Jun 2013 6:26pm
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Re: Unrepentant Sinner (She's not picking up, call back later)
14th Jun 2013 3:32am
Perfect fucking definition of erotica.. i was thinking this should be entered in the contest then seen it was.. beautiful and elegant.
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re: Re: Unrepentant Sinner (She's not picking up, call back later)
14th Jun 2013 5:13am
Devilish said "perfect fucking" I think I've died and gone to poetry heaven.
Thank you!..
:)
Thank you!..
:)
Re: Unrepentant Sinner (She's not picking up, call back later)
17th Jun 2013 2:25pm
Your flow is smooth like vanilla cream and your words are sharp like dark chocolate.
I will follow!
I will follow!
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17th Jun 2013 6:50pm