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Etch A Sketch: Malfunctioning
Broken behind thickened bones
Skin like etch a sketch
couldn't leave sharp alone
Blackened ego strung
from high to low
Self-esteem is only so-so
Just wanna be numb
Countless errors
in my own way
Doing favors
from day to day
Heartless errands
People beggin' me to stay
"I gotta get outta here"
is all I could say
I'm malfunctioning
and i'm reminded everyday
Skin like etch a sketch
couldn't leave sharp alone
Blackened ego strung
from high to low
Self-esteem is only so-so
Just wanna be numb
Countless errors
in my own way
Doing favors
from day to day
Heartless errands
People beggin' me to stay
"I gotta get outta here"
is all I could say
I'm malfunctioning
and i'm reminded everyday
Published 8th Jun 2013
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8th Jun 2013 8:28pm
The very last line, "and I'm reminded everyday" just seems to not fit, the wording of the line I mean. Maybe take out the I'm?
8th Jun 2013 10:37pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 7:52pm
8th Jul 2013 8:02pm
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