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Watching me
On a ray of sun
I sit, watching me
silence on the outside
within I hear echoes
of yesterday's whispers
loving words caresses
On a piece of cloth
rugged, old and frayed
my name, a single drop
of red, gashes in my heart
wrapped in smiles
poulticed with tears
Webs woven overnight
shines with the moonlight
lit in glitters of silver
thinking and remembering
promises to keep
Lavender ribbons float...
I sit, watching me
silence on the outside
within I hear echoes
of yesterday's whispers
loving words caresses
On a piece of cloth
rugged, old and frayed
my name, a single drop
of red, gashes in my heart
wrapped in smiles
poulticed with tears
Webs woven overnight
shines with the moonlight
lit in glitters of silver
thinking and remembering
promises to keep
Lavender ribbons float...
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Re: Watching me
7th Jun 2013 2:58pm
Whimsical, magical and airy very much your signature dear Grace. Always a delight to read your work.
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