Never Never Land

Good poem.  Wonderful images, such as "blueberries bubbling."  But the line "whatever lives must die" seems out of place.  And to me "fairy tales" contain truth.  They are generalizations of a sort.  Thus "fairy tales cannot be just ("my") mine.  To me, if you replace the "whatever lives . . ." line, or delete it and change "fairy tales" to something else ("dreams, visions, for example) your poem will be completely consistent.

thank you very much for your feedback...i'm still learning to fly... our love was alive and happily ever after is a fairy tale that was a damm lie,ha only kidding.but thank you and the bubbling blueberries I was hoping you could smell them...peace  

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absouloutley love your writing.x

your words make me smile...thanks