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Tears
he wiped the tears from my eyes
with the pads of his finger tips
useless as the tears were replaced
with streams down my cheeks
his pain was evident
as I looked into his eyes
that were quickly filled
his tears clouding the blueness
I long to stare into
I love him and I told him
he didn’t say it back, but I know
he showed his love in the way he kissed me
and the gentle way he touched me
making love so tenderly
letting his body speak the words for him
he will not be back
not until he is free to claim me as his own
not until she releases him
not until he is back in my arms
will the tears stop their flow
Published 6th Jun 2013
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6th Jun 2013 2:41pm
Hhhhhmmmm too familiar with this scenerio!
gut wrenching emptiness when the one you want isn't with you...excellent emotive release
gut wrenching emptiness when the one you want isn't with you...excellent emotive release
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6th Jun 2013 3:34pm
Perceptive to hear the love in his actions, and more true than just the words, miss luna.
7th Jun 2013 2:44am
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