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Sometimes
Sometimes I think I have
fallen off the rabbit hole
Instead of in
I am wandering in a strange
terrain that's vaguely familiar
Sometimes I think I may be
living in the mirror
looking out and only seeing
a me, looking into a haven
of another me
Sometimes I feel lost
in a tunnel of echoes
each voice speaking
in tongues
hailing the spirits
Its a silence here
within the quiet
tranquil beyond the peace
yet, my heart beat
is slowing, missing the bellows.
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6th Jun 2013 9:53pm
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6th Jun 2013 12:43pm
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6th Jun 2013 2:35pm
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Re: Sometimes
6th Jun 2013 2:45pm
After we pat you on the back for a job well done you should give yourself one. Tape this up on the refrigerator of your inner self.
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6th Jun 2013 3:20pm
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re: Re: Sometimes
7th Jun 2013 00:22am
Yes, you got that so right. Lost. Thank you for reading and leaving a comments Scat.
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16th Jun 2013 12:32pm