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Knife
I feel it go in
like the devils teeth
rubbing against my veins
I feel it go in
while i watch my blood stain the blade
I feel it go in
now the pain is going away
I felt it go in
now my life is thrown away
like the devils teeth
rubbing against my veins
I feel it go in
while i watch my blood stain the blade
I feel it go in
now the pain is going away
I felt it go in
now my life is thrown away
Published 5th Jun 2013
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6th Jun 2013 6:33am
God, I hate to say it but I love the way that feels. Anymore I have to go deeper to hit my spot of bittersweet. That all too lovely pain inducing, yet catatonically numbing spot. This piece makes me yearn to feel each crimson drop flood the hole I've dug in my skin. I can't relate more. Even the way it burns your mind and makes you feel sick, dead, and even dinner inside. I can feel your anguish. Soo, yeah Haha amazing write.x)
-EmilyRoze
-EmilyRoze
6th Jun 2013 6:35am
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- Edited 19th Jan 2021 6:35am
11th Jun 2013 3:10pm
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