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Just to be
Off the tracks
Not used
To this path
Maybe it's all too soon
Running away
Not from this
Just this mind stray
Breaking the bliss
I don't want this
I just want to be free
Not used
To this path
Maybe it's all too soon
Running away
Not from this
Just this mind stray
Breaking the bliss
I don't want this
I just want to be free
Published 5th Jun 2013
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5th Jun 2013 3:33am
5th Jun 2013 4:02am
5th Jun 2013 8:29am
Feels like the Monkees song by the same name. And by feel I mean it has the same light cadence and simple punch.
Rhythm is cool when it runs up fast, with the first two verses and then leaps the precipice like the fool of the Tarot.
Rhythm is cool when it runs up fast, with the first two verses and then leaps the precipice like the fool of the Tarot.
5th Jun 2013 11:53am
5th Jun 2013 11:54pm
6th Jun 2013 1:24am