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Reading You
I lost count
somewhere along
the laugh line and crow’s feet
each crevice like a roadmap
directing me to the story of your life
I could almost read them
with my finger tips
as if I were reading braille
each line I trace
turns another page in your book
I could lay here and read you for hours
flipping through the pages
of the best story I ever read
somewhere along
the laugh line and crow’s feet
each crevice like a roadmap
directing me to the story of your life
I could almost read them
with my finger tips
as if I were reading braille
each line I trace
turns another page in your book
I could lay here and read you for hours
flipping through the pages
of the best story I ever read
Published 5th Jun 2013
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5th Jun 2013 4:34am
Wow this is awesome n loving! Very well done lady
I'm betting your 'story' is just as good though :)
I'm betting your 'story' is just as good though :)
5th Jun 2013 2:07pm
5th Jun 2013 5:16am
5th Jun 2013 2:07pm
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 11:39am
5th Jun 2013 8:29am
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5th Jun 2013 2:09pm
Thank you, I always felt each line is a well earn line, like you paid your dues. :)
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
5th Jun 2013 10:24am
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5th Jun 2013 9:32pm
I love the book reference here,
and the crow feet, and the braille.
I love all of it.
Very well written.
and the crow feet, and the braille.
I love all of it.
Very well written.
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
6th Jun 2013 4:22pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 11th Jun 2019 9:40pm
7th Jun 2013 9:18am
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