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Of time and tale of blue
Dreams of the blue tigress
reached the Indian boys slumber
He awoke with scratches
but thought nothing of it
and into the forest he went
Dipping his hands into clay
wiped being upon his face
closed his eyes to drift away
and followed the sun...
Heat measured steps
lighted along
a vision quested pathway
spoke secret depths
as he went further into the jungle
stopping at the sound
of water falling down
He breathed in and was swept
by the smells that had crept
from all the blossoming flora
Upon opening his eyes
at the edge of the sky
stood the blue tigress...
just the mist
a cliff
and a dream
Sacre' Blue
And he dove...
reached the Indian boys slumber
He awoke with scratches
but thought nothing of it
and into the forest he went
Dipping his hands into clay
wiped being upon his face
closed his eyes to drift away
and followed the sun...
Heat measured steps
lighted along
a vision quested pathway
spoke secret depths
as he went further into the jungle
stopping at the sound
of water falling down
He breathed in and was swept
by the smells that had crept
from all the blossoming flora
Upon opening his eyes
at the edge of the sky
stood the blue tigress...
just the mist
a cliff
and a dream
Sacre' Blue
And he dove...
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5th Jun 2013 2:16pm
Indeed Life:) Thank You for reading Me Dear Queen humble and grateful!!!
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Re: Of time and tale of blue
5th Jun 2013 1:14pm
Sheer beauty; the words describe a place that the soul wishes to see. lovely!
Red
Red
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re: Re: Of time and tale of blue
5th Jun 2013 2:19pm
Indeed Dear Red Always the ultimate are the leaps of dreams!!!
Thank You:)
Thank You:)
Re: Of time and tale of blue
5th Jun 2013 5:24pm
Our lives are empty without dreams and ambitions,and to take that initial step takes a lot of courage, as in your leap of faith!
Soulfully written...like it!
Soulfully written...like it!
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5th Jun 2013 6:38pm
Re: Of time and tale of blue
5th Jun 2013 9:28pm
You're a master of creating an atmosphere,
a touch of sound here, an image here,
and a landscape is created within
words.
Very well written as usual, Soul :)
a touch of sound here, an image here,
and a landscape is created within
words.
Very well written as usual, Soul :)
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re: Re: Of time and tale of blue
5th Jun 2013 10:09pm
You are so kind Dear Scribbler...I am thankful it conveys well...I worry of these things considering my love of the cryptic...sometimes I wrap too much in that and don't give enough...Thank You!!!
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