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Sand and Stone
we are the opposites that attract
letting the best in each shine
I am ubiquitous like the sand
folding around you as a cushion
against the waves of power
you are the stone sturdy in substance
through strength you carry
the world on your own
but I am the sand that softly
folds into your touch
we are a pulse that beats as one
for I am the sand
and you are stone
letting the best in each shine
I am ubiquitous like the sand
folding around you as a cushion
against the waves of power
you are the stone sturdy in substance
through strength you carry
the world on your own
but I am the sand that softly
folds into your touch
we are a pulse that beats as one
for I am the sand
and you are stone
Published 29th May 2013
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Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
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29th May 2013 4:37pm
A string of metaphors superbly moulded to make an allegory. Sign of a true poet.
29th May 2013 9:55pm
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 3:35pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 11th Jun 2019 9:40pm
1st Jun 2013 11:06am
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2nd Jun 2013 8:44pm
2nd Jun 2013 8:40pm
Strong write, that sings of love,
rushing in and out as the tide.
I love the title.
I love the poem.
rushing in and out as the tide.
I love the title.
I love the poem.
2nd Jun 2013 8:45pm