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I Call Her.....
I Call Her….
Slave
My iron clad beauty.
Kneeling with the poise and grace
Of a gazelle sauntering through the grasslands
I Call Her….
Whore
Wet…Wanton….Waiting
A never ending volcanic eruption
Hot molten lava oozing down creamy thighs
I Call Her….
Pain Slut
Bruised....Broken....Battered
She writhes, her body burns white hot
While my whip licks electric blue sparks from her flesh
Spent....
Depleted of all she is, Shrouded in my darkness,
I tenderly lift her up, bathing her in all that I am, all that she has made me
I Call Her ......Mine!
Slave
My iron clad beauty.
Kneeling with the poise and grace
Of a gazelle sauntering through the grasslands
I Call Her….
Whore
Wet…Wanton….Waiting
A never ending volcanic eruption
Hot molten lava oozing down creamy thighs
I Call Her….
Pain Slut
Bruised....Broken....Battered
She writhes, her body burns white hot
While my whip licks electric blue sparks from her flesh
Spent....
Depleted of all she is, Shrouded in my darkness,
I tenderly lift her up, bathing her in all that I am, all that she has made me
I Call Her ......Mine!
Published 26th May 2013
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Anonymous
- Edited 26th Jun 2018 9:39pm
26th May 2013 3:50pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 26th May 2013 4:23pm
26th May 2013 4:22pm
One of the best erotic poems, written by a male poet, Ive read on DU. The heat clings to my skin like the sun in it's birth to shine.
Beautiful and sexy piece! Call Her what you want..........claim her yours! Well done!Xo
Welcome to DUP!:)
Poetic Love~
Beautiful and sexy piece! Call Her what you want..........claim her yours! Well done!Xo
Welcome to DUP!:)
Poetic Love~
26th May 2013 9:19pm
Lily Mae: I am so glad that you enjoyed the read....I have read many of your poems, and consider myself a big fan
Thank you for reading -SS
Thank you for reading -SS
26th May 2013 9:22pm
Rain: "The heat clings to my skin like the sun in it's birth to shine. "
Good God....that took my breath away,! Your words humble me.....Thank you!
SS
Good God....that took my breath away,! Your words humble me.....Thank you!
SS
26th May 2013 10:06pm
oh my...''Mine''one of the most desired words for a submissive to hear ...
I really love this piece..
I really love this piece..
26th May 2013 11:07pm
Geminisb: I am so glad that you can relate to the power, the word " mine" wields ....especially to a submissive .
Thank you for reading -SS
Thank you for reading -SS
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
27th May 2013 6:06pm
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27th May 2013 10:22pm
Enticing extremes my fav lives "Depleted of all she is, Shrouded in my darkness,
I tenderly lift her up, bathing her in all that I am, all that she has made me
I Call Her ......Mine!"
An interesting piece!
Red
I tenderly lift her up, bathing her in all that I am, all that she has made me
I Call Her ......Mine!"
An interesting piece!
Red
28th May 2013 2:38am
Gypsy Red: Thank you for taking the time to comment...so glad you enjoyed the read -SS
28th May 2013 2:36am
floweregirl: thank you for both, your kind words, as well as your welcome to DU
SS
SS
28th Jan 2014 6:42pm
i think u win the cake
cummy cummy cummy
ok yummy
as u were born
with the
biggy biggyxbiggy
not many men r endowed
they way u r
see any
certainly not me
cummy cummy cummy
ok yummy
as u were born
with the
biggy biggyxbiggy
not many men r endowed
they way u r
see any
certainly not me