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Here and Now
I perch upon your lap
legs wrapped, no space between
nose to nose
eye to eye
stealing breath soaked sweetly
with our scents
moans and groans our only sounds
as the moment intensifies
a tear leaks, he catches it
with his tongue
grabs my hair
and thrusts hard
trying to erase my thought
keeping me in
the here and now
legs wrapped, no space between
nose to nose
eye to eye
stealing breath soaked sweetly
with our scents
moans and groans our only sounds
as the moment intensifies
a tear leaks, he catches it
with his tongue
grabs my hair
and thrusts hard
trying to erase my thought
keeping me in
the here and now
Published 25th May 2013
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25th May 2013 6:53pm
Good news! According to the Poetry Assessor (http://115.146.95.34/poetry/) this poem scores -1.23 which means it has the characteristics of a professional poem.
26th May 2013 2:10am
25th May 2013 7:04pm
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25th May 2013 7:31pm
Short and sweet, yet very intense. Brilliant use of words that allows the reader to create a mental picture.
26th May 2013 2:10am
25th May 2013 8:18pm
26th May 2013 2:11am
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- Edited 11th Jun 2019 9:40pm
26th May 2013 7:25am
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26th May 2013 3:46pm
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
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