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I Rage!
I am a survivor!
A fucking fighting beast,
a combatant killing machine,
BUT I am also a woman
with my own fucking needs!
I am tiered of having to
justify that to those who
view that a weakness in me!!!
I do not want hear:
“Oh You can handle it, you’ll be ok”,
“You’re strong, you’re a soldier”;
Motherfuckers!!! You do it,
if it is that easy, yourselves!
I have walked my path alone,
been woman and man,
taken care of it all, problems,
people and property,
never asking for a hand,
always standing tall,
stout of breast,
never letting anyone
see me sweat.
Too many are watching and waiting,
waiting to see me fall,
gather into a fetal position
or on my belly crawl.
Well guess what?!
You BITCHES can enjoy this now,
this is close to it as I will ever get!
I know I have lost my composure,
that I never let my basest self reflect,
but I am HUMAN
with everything that entails!
I am not at my strongest
or my best at this moment,
in this I have failed but I still… walk alone.
More alone than ever before,
eventually I will get it together,
regroup, battle weary and weatherworn
but I will have won the day and moved on.
This I will say: do not tell me what I know,
if a friend just prop me up if I falter,
hold my hand do not let me wander,
listen as I silently weep
and speak not of things,
of which I have no need. Please…
A fucking fighting beast,
a combatant killing machine,
BUT I am also a woman
with my own fucking needs!
I am tiered of having to
justify that to those who
view that a weakness in me!!!
I do not want hear:
“Oh You can handle it, you’ll be ok”,
“You’re strong, you’re a soldier”;
Motherfuckers!!! You do it,
if it is that easy, yourselves!
I have walked my path alone,
been woman and man,
taken care of it all, problems,
people and property,
never asking for a hand,
always standing tall,
stout of breast,
never letting anyone
see me sweat.
Too many are watching and waiting,
waiting to see me fall,
gather into a fetal position
or on my belly crawl.
Well guess what?!
You BITCHES can enjoy this now,
this is close to it as I will ever get!
I know I have lost my composure,
that I never let my basest self reflect,
but I am HUMAN
with everything that entails!
I am not at my strongest
or my best at this moment,
in this I have failed but I still… walk alone.
More alone than ever before,
eventually I will get it together,
regroup, battle weary and weatherworn
but I will have won the day and moved on.
This I will say: do not tell me what I know,
if a friend just prop me up if I falter,
hold my hand do not let me wander,
listen as I silently weep
and speak not of things,
of which I have no need. Please…
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Re: I Rage!
20th May 2013 5:51pm
Whoa... THAT was a RAGE! I'm sorry to know ur in pain my friend, whatever n whenever u need an ear, I'm here
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20th May 2013 5:53pm
Re: I Rage!
20th May 2013 6:06pm
I just wish I could lend you a helping hand or a shoulder to cry on, Red; as you vent your rage, I'll patiently listen! What are friends for?
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20th May 2013 7:28pm
Amen to the last, this piece is my release publicly I have to keep my cool but here, this is my mountain and the piece my scream. Thank You my dear.
Red
Red
Re: I Rage!
20th May 2013 7:49pm
Blimey your rage...and rock, much venom and well rage i this right, my sort of poetry great stuff dearest red.
Marcus
Marcus
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20th May 2013 7:58pm
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Anonymous
20th May 2013 8:20pm
Venting is good! Do as much as you need, whenever you need, in order to feel better.
I will say this, You 'Rage' Beautifully! Sending positive energy your way lovely Red! Xo
I will say this, You 'Rage' Beautifully! Sending positive energy your way lovely Red! Xo
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20th May 2013 9:43pm
Ms.Rain I humbly accept the positive chi, it is much needed and well received.Thank you
Red
Red
Re: I Rage!
20th May 2013 8:54pm
This Is So Powerful...
and heartfelt, much understood and over stood
YOU are MORE than a survivor you are elite spirit!
Fire
and heartfelt, much understood and over stood
YOU are MORE than a survivor you are elite spirit!
Fire
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20th May 2013 9:46pm
My sister your light is also an incandescent ray in the darkness thank you,much love.
Red
Red
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21st May 2013 1:49pm
Lol Ethie, glad you did, I think we can all relate to this one,thanks for stopping by.
Red
Red
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23rd May 2013 1:21pm
Friend Naajir you may be right I might have broken the mic. As a matter fact I do have two pieces on YouTube in spoken word and as you feel that this one would make a good spoken word piece,I will consider it. Thank you for stopping by I love seeing your comments.
Red
Red