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have you ever noticed on the forums here,
how much that assholes are nice and clear,
when we ask for help they answer with hate,
then wonder why theres always a debate,
honestly they should just fuck off and masturbate,
instead of just sitting there trying to delegate,
well im sick of these assholes and trying to negotiate,
to see if theres is another way around it,
but there isnt so fuck they can suck it,
new to the site people start a thread and then they strike,
hitting them hard saying this has now been done twice,
or fuck off, go away, but you bunch of motherfuckers need to get a life,
oh sorry if you already do stop picking on us and tend to your wife,
as far as i know this site is about poems,
and to chat to others see how its goin,
but you venomous assholes like to think your in control,
even though you dont see how much your an arse hole,
im not even trying to make this poem any good,
in fact fuck it, i may aswell quit this site really think i should?,
because these motherfuckers seem to think they rule,
even though they are wankers probably still in school,
oh sorry, i mean even though they are so fucking cool,
must be fun to pick on each other,
and no im not going to make a joke about their mother,
so to all you forum post wank stains on here sniping,
get a fucking life and quite griping,
see ive been here for 50 plus days,
and with your turds im surprised anyones stayed,
well think i'll pack it in and just leave,
telling me to go away and try and read,
well i gotta confess ive been spotted by a pro writer,
to my subscribers i thank you for not being a shiter,
i will come back now and then to drop in a poem,
but thanks to these asshole, im packing up and going..............................
Written by brokenlife
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