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participle paranegation process(es)
thousands'o nights of
love's
apparitions
grinding dreamworld's
dreamland
into magic dust that does no
thing
for thee misqualified[though
overly qualitized]
soulheart'd
demonstrations, a grande
mistook i'dentity
lurking
skulking thru murky(simple)passé
[past]participles,
infinitives, etcetera[n]
wordies all-in-a-row as little
tinsoldiers (done gone
plastique)
in thee
everwas always'been world[word] At War
wit bretheren
of thy least'known self....
a denial as famed & practiced as that
afterlife & judgment wee all must
concede to even'tho wee know wee
go no'where
for such pills,ills,
requisitions
& such, as
unintelligible as 'this' may likely be
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Published 15th May 2013
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17th May 2013 7:02am
(See note on 'calm' in next poem comment.)
All those lies lie on the floor of the hard metal/mental state
that you put us and pull us little threads out and warp and
woof us doggies. But HA! really, this poem's smooth complexity
molds a sadness I can't describe.
(On my list of the damned as well.)
All those lies lie on the floor of the hard metal/mental state
that you put us and pull us little threads out and warp and
woof us doggies. But HA! really, this poem's smooth complexity
molds a sadness I can't describe.
(On my list of the damned as well.)
17th May 2013 5:31pm
ah sure don'mean t'upset no body no how, but I seems
to have strange unconscious effect on other folks' unconscious
whatevers........
I sure do appreciates yr respondalations unto my pretenses of being 'artist'....
17th May 2013 10:16am
17th May 2013 5:33pm
eye
scare myself almost as much as aye scare
others...it's pretty fckn funny
bless ye, kid
scare myself almost as much as aye scare
others...it's pretty fckn funny
bless ye, kid