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Some Love for Me
Baby, can you find some love for me;
would that be so hard
to take a chance on and see?
I give you my heart, unconditionally,
but its all for naught
if you cannot share yours with me.
I know you, better than you know yourself,
aware of the things you hide behind
a cocky demeanor from everyone else.
By choice, I remain in the peripheral of your life,
giving you the time and space
to discover the truth you need to decide.
I am first and foremost your oldest friend
a passion of your youth, your first,
the one whose love never came to an end.
By some wicked twist of fate
we find ourselves face to face
and discover, that where once there was fire,
ashes remain and all they needed
was a spark to rekindle again.
So why is it, we cannot find
a way to capture that flame,
grow it into a conflagration of passion
that bears the love that once,
long ago, knew our name.
Please baby, please, can you find
that love again for me;
would it be so impossible, to gamble
on us, on our love and give
our story a new ending?
Gypsy Red
would that be so hard
to take a chance on and see?
I give you my heart, unconditionally,
but its all for naught
if you cannot share yours with me.
I know you, better than you know yourself,
aware of the things you hide behind
a cocky demeanor from everyone else.
By choice, I remain in the peripheral of your life,
giving you the time and space
to discover the truth you need to decide.
I am first and foremost your oldest friend
a passion of your youth, your first,
the one whose love never came to an end.
By some wicked twist of fate
we find ourselves face to face
and discover, that where once there was fire,
ashes remain and all they needed
was a spark to rekindle again.
So why is it, we cannot find
a way to capture that flame,
grow it into a conflagration of passion
that bears the love that once,
long ago, knew our name.
Please baby, please, can you find
that love again for me;
would it be so impossible, to gamble
on us, on our love and give
our story a new ending?
Gypsy Red
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Re: Some Love for Me
14th May 2013 5:33pm
re: Re: Some Love for Me
14th May 2013 5:36pm
Yeees on both counts, thank you sweets for your continual support. Big huggs
Red
Red
Re: Some Love for Me
14th May 2013 5:48pm
Very touching n reminiscent of a love I once knew...
Beautifully expressed my friend! :)
Beautifully expressed my friend! :)
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re: Re: Some Love for Me
14th May 2013 6:19pm
I think many people at some point have felt or feel this way, Thanks for stopping by to read PM.
Red
Red
Re: Some Love for Me
14th May 2013 5:51pm
This is so captivating as I can relate...just can't pen it the way you did Red. Well done my friend!
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re: Re: Some Love for Me
14th May 2013 6:22pm
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14th May 2013 6:12pm
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re: Re: Some Love for Me
14th May 2013 6:23pm
Thank you my sweet Crim, it is my pleasure to create such things for you guys.
Red
Red
Re: Some Love for Me
14th May 2013 6:27pm
makes you wonder how many people
over time have asked the same heartbreaking
question you beg in your second to last verse
great work
love the art too!!!
over time have asked the same heartbreaking
question you beg in your second to last verse
great work
love the art too!!!
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re: Re: Some Love for Me
14th May 2013 7:40pm
Indeed it does,thanks for stopping by to read my and for the lovely comment.
Red
Red
Re: Some Love for Me
14th May 2013 7:46pm
Fantastic write as always i think we can all relate to this.
Great stuff
Marcus
Great stuff
Marcus
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re: Re: Some Love for Me
14th May 2013 7:51pm
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14th May 2013 8:45pm
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re: Re: Some Love for Me
14th May 2013 9:00pm
Thanks Magda for noticing that little touch yes I change them to keep it fresh. Thank you again :-)
Red
Red
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14th May 2013 8:47pm
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re: Re: Some Love for Me
14th May 2013 9:01pm
Re: Some Love for Me
14th May 2013 9:09pm
Everything about this is beautiful! Very relatable. I feel the heart behind this piece. Wonderfully done.
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re: Re: Some Love for Me
14th May 2013 9:36pm
Re: Some Love for Me
15th May 2013 00:07am
As I have said to Dear Magdalena, I say to You as well, I stroll our great museum admiring the painted art, colors drip with such emotive clarity
and then there are ones that, You just gaze at with awe.
Such a Beautiful painting Dear Red!!!
and then there are ones that, You just gaze at with awe.
Such a Beautiful painting Dear Red!!!
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re: Re: Some Love for Me
15th May 2013 00:57am
You my dear Soul are the greatest ego boost a girl can have, you are the coolest cat at the DU lol
Thank you.
Red
Thank you.
Red
Re: Some Love for Me
15th May 2013 8:04am
WOW !! The most beautiful love poem i have ever read... I could feel the each line as if written entirely on me. lol. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece. xoxo
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re: Re: Some Love for Me
15th May 2013 1:51pm
Re: Some Love for Me
16th May 2013 7:04pm
The heart cry of all of us at some point. You are the Queen of blending visual with words!
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re: Re: Some Love for Me
16th May 2013 7:46pm
Then I humbly bow to your kind words my friend.much love to ya thanks for reading this piece.
Red
Red