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Sorrows to the Rain
I whispered my sorrows to the rain
blended and mixed my tears
so no one would know of my pain.
I walked a mile oblivious as to where
just to keep moving…
just keep moving to no avail.
I could not outrun my hurt
or change my fate, no, I could not alter
the tragic events of this day.
I stopped and just stood there
letting the rain, my skin, permeate
hoping it would wash my sin away.
My love for you is prohibited
yet I love without regard
for the restriction.
I harbored this love, as long as I can recollect;
to be in your arms again was more
than I could refuse to accept.
So the grief I feel now is the punishment
I have to resign myself to,
for those stolen days together, we spent.
Defiantly I whisper to the rain
that I love you and will, always,
this feeling waited dormant too long
to just quietly die and fade away.
By Gypsy Red
blended and mixed my tears
so no one would know of my pain.
I walked a mile oblivious as to where
just to keep moving…
just keep moving to no avail.
I could not outrun my hurt
or change my fate, no, I could not alter
the tragic events of this day.
I stopped and just stood there
letting the rain, my skin, permeate
hoping it would wash my sin away.
My love for you is prohibited
yet I love without regard
for the restriction.
I harbored this love, as long as I can recollect;
to be in your arms again was more
than I could refuse to accept.
So the grief I feel now is the punishment
I have to resign myself to,
for those stolen days together, we spent.
Defiantly I whisper to the rain
that I love you and will, always,
this feeling waited dormant too long
to just quietly die and fade away.
By Gypsy Red
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Re: Sorrows to the Rain
13th May 2013 7:41pm
That was beautiful Red
The rain hides a multitude of sins, regrets,loss and longings. A beautiful way to display an undying love.
much love
G
The rain hides a multitude of sins, regrets,loss and longings. A beautiful way to display an undying love.
much love
G
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re: Re: Sorrows to the Rain
13th May 2013 7:48pm
But it hurts too G, thanks for stopping by sweets and bringing that positive chi!
Red
Red
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re: Re: Sorrows to the Rain
13th May 2013 8:23pm
Yes, it does doesn't it, It is a good match to the piece. Thanks Magda.
Red
Red
Re: Sorrows to the Rain
13th May 2013 8:40pm
Quite sad, Red. Reminds of the day I felt like that and I decided to walk away and not come back. So I walked until I couldn't walk any more. My legs hurt and my shoes pinched and I had no more energy to go on. I thought I would forget the hurt in my heart; but when I recovered it was still there.
A simply beautiful poem, Red. My poetic wizard!
A simply beautiful poem, Red. My poetic wizard!
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re: Re: Sorrows to the Rain
13th May 2013 9:59pm
Oh my friend we share the same sorrows yes it is not a pleasant thing.Thank you my friend.
Red
Red
Re: Sorrows to the Rain
13th May 2013 8:40pm
Hurts can't be washed away but it will grow less keen with time. Good read, dear Red, keep the chin up.
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13th May 2013 10:04pm
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13th May 2013 10:05pm
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13th May 2013 10:06pm
Re: Sorrows to the Rain
13th May 2013 11:31pm
Tit for tat Girly-Q I come to see You:)
Time and the Heart---friend or foe...they've both been both...the trick is breaking bread with the bad and only seeing good...the rub is the good is always harder to remember...I Myself claim senility And try to remember today and embrace tomorrow....This was a very touching work Dear Red...hope You find some sun!!!
Time and the Heart---friend or foe...they've both been both...the trick is breaking bread with the bad and only seeing good...the rub is the good is always harder to remember...I Myself claim senility And try to remember today and embrace tomorrow....This was a very touching work Dear Red...hope You find some sun!!!
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re: Re: Sorrows to the Rain
14th May 2013 00:15am
I like your philosophy but it does not seem to work for me, I am ruled by extreme passions good and bad. When I hate its with everything I got till death and beyond,but when I love, I love hard to eternity and the next life, there are no in betweens for me. I am hoping for that sun too.Thank you Soul.
Red
Red
re: re: Re: Sorrows to the Rain
14th May 2013 00:41am
Ahhhh well...passion:) This i'd expect for it is what's known of You Dear Red!!!
So chase down that Damn Sun and make it cough up a cup :)
So chase down that Damn Sun and make it cough up a cup :)
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14th May 2013 00:56am
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Re: Sorrows to the Rain
14th May 2013 00:09am
A very sad write, using the rain added to the tone n made it
a dreary n somber ink, which highly effective! brava :)
a dreary n somber ink, which highly effective! brava :)
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re: Re: Sorrows to the Rain
14th May 2013 00:18am
That was the idea to magnify the feeling of the piece, thanks for reading sweets, I appreciate ya.
Red
Red
Re: Sorrows to the Rain
14th May 2013 00:39am
great capture of a very sad moment
one can really feel the emotion you put behind this
i much enjoyed
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one can really feel the emotion you put behind this
i much enjoyed
=].
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Re: Sorrows to the Rain
16th May 2013 8:19pm
When emotions are restricted, the more they overflow just like the rain when trapped... Lucky is the guy who owns your heart!
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re: Re: Sorrows to the Rain
16th May 2013 8:47pm
You'd think wouldn't you? Lets see if this story has a happy ending it is yet unwritten. Thank you My friend for stopping by.
Red
Red