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first time i knew
sprinting along pattaya beach
thumping dance beats in the background
two assassins in tow
man their fast
brothers born,now lipstick beauties
whom wouldn't think twice
thinking to myself
its hard to run in this sand
wish i had kept the gym up
then a sick feeling hits me
right in the pit of my stomach
i realise i may never see your face again
thats the first time i knew
thumping dance beats in the background
two assassins in tow
man their fast
brothers born,now lipstick beauties
whom wouldn't think twice
thinking to myself
its hard to run in this sand
wish i had kept the gym up
then a sick feeling hits me
right in the pit of my stomach
i realise i may never see your face again
thats the first time i knew
Published 12th May 2013
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12th May 2013 9:20am
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12th May 2013 1:18pm
sound gabriel
glad you thought it was interesting one
that what i was trying for,was going to add more detail but wanted to keep simply if that makes sense.
thank you for the lovely comment
sean
glad you thought it was interesting one
that what i was trying for,was going to add more detail but wanted to keep simply if that makes sense.
thank you for the lovely comment
sean
12th May 2013 2:37pm
12th May 2013 10:10pm
14th May 2013 5:53pm
"then a sick feeling hits me
right in the pit of my stomach "
That's feeling that tells so much!! enjoyed! :)
right in the pit of my stomach "
That's feeling that tells so much!! enjoyed! :)
14th May 2013 6:26pm
1st Jun 2013 11:49am
1st Jun 2013 4:55pm
thank you grace,Pattaya great place to party if you haven't been,just got to be very careful
Anonymous
13th Jun 2013 5:20pm
Rain loves this! :) Wonderful read, SEAN! Xo
15th Jun 2013 5:04pm
thank you Rain always a very big compliment to get a nice comment from you x
sean
sean