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she says "darling" with a 'g' that hangs
in the air like the finest silk dress
draped over the most soulful of down and dirty
blues singers. It would be frightening,
if it wasn't encased in the most delicate of grace
she also has a "darlin'", that has a downhome heart
to it, that stops short of the grand display
and hugs with a lullaby that hums the feel of family
I have heard faint echos of "my love"
whispered through the trees of endearment
and as long as I get a smile and a "poppa bear";
with just the right amount of silliness,
I am destined to dance my feet
to their bloody ends, along each one of her trails
in the air like the finest silk dress
draped over the most soulful of down and dirty
blues singers. It would be frightening,
if it wasn't encased in the most delicate of grace
she also has a "darlin'", that has a downhome heart
to it, that stops short of the grand display
and hugs with a lullaby that hums the feel of family
I have heard faint echos of "my love"
whispered through the trees of endearment
and as long as I get a smile and a "poppa bear";
with just the right amount of silliness,
I am destined to dance my feet
to their bloody ends, along each one of her trails
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Re: pet sounds
10th May 2013 00:26am
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10th May 2013 1:06am
Yep, its filled with an understanding, a closeness that could easily envoke the envy of whoever reads it, certainly did me anyway. It's cool and fluid with the right amount of sentiment.
Hat off to you LB, your consistansy is an.asset to.you.
..Sorry 'bout the spelling
Hat off to you LB, your consistansy is an.asset to.you.
..Sorry 'bout the spelling
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10th May 2013 3:52am
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10th May 2013 4:02am
yeah great album, may have stolen that title.
thanks a bunch Steve, and good to see ya btw... I dig what you are saying and am totally not against recycling my own lines if they suit somewhere else better.
thanks a bunch Steve, and good to see ya btw... I dig what you are saying and am totally not against recycling my own lines if they suit somewhere else better.
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10th May 2013 2:09am
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10th May 2013 1:51pm
well, if there are words that can make you twirl, me and the evening breeze gots some talkin to do...
I mean it, thank you very much Amber
I mean it, thank you very much Amber
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12th May 2013 11:35am
I don't doubt that you do.
between me, and the magnets, and the singing of the stagnant, the dust must be kicked up enough, to watch the woman twirl
between me, and the magnets, and the singing of the stagnant, the dust must be kicked up enough, to watch the woman twirl
Re: pet sounds
10th May 2013 2:38pm
Methinks that is a love song any woman would appreciate Darlin (Ha! I just had to do that! lol)
Wonderful read :)
Wonderful read :)
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10th May 2013 3:03pm
nice, I imagine you might have a "dahlun" to you, ,maybe?
thanks much Maggie, gotta shake out the juju you know, spring and all...very kind of you
thanks much Maggie, gotta shake out the juju you know, spring and all...very kind of you
Re: pet sounds
10th May 2013 2:38pm
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10th May 2013 6:24pm
Wow. LB in love ;) Terrific flow and balance throughout with an outstanding first stanza. Like Mr. Bragg mentioned earlier, the last two lines are absolutely awesome and tie a nice ribbon to it all. It's actually beautiful, man, and I mean that in the most sincerest sense.
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10th May 2013 8:14pm
ah, the big burly buy loves beautiful, and sincere.
thank you very kindly Tony!
thank you very kindly Tony!
Re: pet sounds
26th Jun 2013 11:40pm
she says "darling" with a 'g' that hangs
in the air like the finest silk dress
Right from that opening ... lovely
in the air like the finest silk dress
Right from that opening ... lovely
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27th Jun 2013 11:30am