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Silk Velveteen Purse
A sows ear turned,
into a silk velveteen purse,
It envelopes you in its warm feel
when its interior is searched.
Its greatest asset
is its enclosed pearl;
the silky smooth feel
of this tiny sphere
belies its importance
within its whorl.
An extrasensory delight
when its maw lays open,
there is no dentin in sight
to mar this smile, its just a token.
It is made to surprisingly expand,
especially after its been broken.
Such is the sensual demand,
a wealth contained therein;
all manner of precious cargo
can be carried safely within.
Its most attractive feature
is its secretive portability,
reserved for the singular venture
of amorous masculinity.
Gypsy Red
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Published 9th May 2013
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
9th May 2013 5:04pm
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9th May 2013 5:18pm
And it is very much a trick of the eye, as no ahem... body parts where used lol Thanks Strider!
Red
Red
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
9th May 2013 5:07pm
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9th May 2013 5:19pm
Thank you my dearest it is in violets comp. a trick of double entendre.
Red
Red
Red, this is keenly imaginative, and beautifully expressed.
I'm laughing as I read it. I am very much awed; I am filled with admiration for the skill and talent that birthed this.
And the words have a texture similar to the feel of this Silk Velteen Purse. It's truly an amazing awesome read.
I'm laughing as I read it. I am very much awed; I am filled with admiration for the skill and talent that birthed this.
And the words have a texture similar to the feel of this Silk Velteen Purse. It's truly an amazing awesome read.
Thank you my friend. Writing in double entendre is very challenging to express the founding idea without being obvious and as for the image it is a trick, the eye sees what it wants to. :-)
Thank you for the lovely comment
Red
Thank you for the lovely comment
Red
9th May 2013 7:35pm
The image is perfect, Red. It goes with the theme, and that is an accomplishment. Explanations will demystify it. A mystery must not be explained, else it ceases to be one.
9th May 2013 7:41pm
9th May 2013 9:07pm
9th May 2013 10:25pm
Soul you always leave me sweet comments, thank you for all of them. :-)
Red
Red
9th May 2013 9:41pm
9th May 2013 10:27pm
I do try my sister, when my mind is tranquil my imagination and words flow with ease.Thank you so much. :-)
Red
Red
9th May 2013 10:45pm
Oh snap! I don't believe I'll ever think of a purse the same way again...lol...Wonderful ink, Red ;-)
9th May 2013 11:10pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 3:35pm
13th May 2013 2:52pm
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13th May 2013 3:30pm
Yes, the image is a trick of the eye, but it fits the piece, thank you for reading and commenting glad you enjoyed it.
Red
Red